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TRUTH (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
The stars float by like ashes
From God's cigarette
I swear He smokes at least two packs a night
He probably has a cough worse than my aunt's
She's been smoking since she was seven
Or that's what she says
I'm sure it's a lie
When you want to go inside, tell me
It's getting kind of cold and it's a little bit windy
Anyway, I'm sure that's why we all die
We all choke on God's second-hand smoke
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.125
Weighted score: 5.5715003
Overall Rank: 2424
Posted: December 21, 2003 9:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 9:31 PM PST
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