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TRUTH (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
The stars float by like ashes From God's cigarette I swear He smokes at least two packs a night He probably has a cough worse than my aunt's She's been smoking since she was seven Or that's what she says I'm sure it's a lie When you want to go inside, tell me It's getting kind of cold and it's a little bit windy Anyway, I'm sure that's why we all die We all choke on God's second-hand smoke

Up the ladder: Fathers
Down the ladder: metahaiku

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.125
Weighted score: 5.5715003
Overall Rank: 2432
Posted: December 21, 2003 9:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 9:31 PM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 22-Dec-03/12:40 AM | Reply
He probably has a hemoroid named uranus.
[n/a] Everyone @ 81.128.136.167 | 22-Dec-03/3:33 PM | Reply
At some point in your life, you decided to write a poeme about God smoking, and about stars looking like ashes. Why?
[3] sliver @ 63.189.17.188 | 22-Dec-03/9:33 PM | Reply
WEEELLL, Thats a reasonable assumption:(
[8] richa @ 81.178.224.24 | 23-Dec-03/8:12 AM | Reply
FALSEHOOD

cute idea though, whimsical.
[8] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 27-Aug-04/3:29 PM | Reply
hilarious. :)
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