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Perils of the Learning Curve (Free verse) by Dovina
Do we ever tell our patients, that because we are still new, their risk of some catastrophe is multiplied by two, that they’d do better with a doctor of experience and skill than my grappling with ignorance, which could hurt them, maybe kill? Just because I’m training At a clinic or a ward, treating drunkards and demented, Poor and uninsured, should I undermine their confidence or deprive them confident air, explain how they are helping, make doctors more prepared? It’s for the good of medicine, the people as a whole, I hone my skills and practice on these retarded souls. The leg lost here in learning how to diagnose keeps ten well-healed and earning. That’s the purpose, I suppose. Perfection without practice, the best of possible care, must trump a learner’s lesson— an opinion patients share. Eventually they benefit But first a few are harmed— experience for progress— but they go away uncharmed.

Up the ladder: New Years Eve, 1999

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Posted: March 19, 2006 4:05 PM PST; Last modified: March 19, 2006 4:05 PM PST
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[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 19-Mar-06/4:20 PM | Reply
D. - this is a kickass poem, serious yet amusing and the rhyme/rhythm scheme is almost flawless. 'The best of possible care' didn't quite fit right with my reading of this, but other than that, no faults.
Is this related to the events in the news recently? I never did get round to checking that out like I meant to.
Great poem anyway.
[n/a] Dovina @ 12.72.23.241 > Ranger | 19-Mar-06/4:42 PM | Reply
Thanks. It's based on what a doctor told me about his internship. He felt guilty about performing surgeries where he had no experience except as an assistant, yet he felt that without practice, he'd never become good.

"The best of possible care" is what all patients want. Maybe I could word it better.
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > Dovina | 19-Mar-06/4:55 PM | Reply
Ah - whereas I got the trainee/inexperienced doctor bit I thought it also hinted at drug testing too. The other day there was a big news story (I've checked it out now) about an antibody drug test which went spectacularly wrong - it had been tested on animals with no ill results, but when taken by humans it caused massive reactions and left them in monstrous amounts of pain - I think two of the 6 are still critical, one on organ support. So yes, very topical.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.117.10 | 19-Mar-06/5:02 PM | Reply
Uncharmed- is the best you can do at the end? Bah! 9.5
rounding down. If you have to rewrite the whole line, fix it.
[n/a] Dovina @ 12.72.23.241 > INTRANSIT | 19-Mar-06/5:10 PM | Reply
Bah? Is not the act this doctor puts on for his patients akin to charming a snake. After all skill and educatioin lie in shambles at your feet, what is lef, my good man, but to try and charm them. Okay, maybe it's a woman's take on some of the credentials I've been handed over the years.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.117.6 > Dovina | 19-Mar-06/5:20 PM | Reply
Credentials? Doctors have credentials?
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > INTRANSIT | 19-Mar-06/5:23 PM | Reply
Credentials? Maybe. Credenzas? Certainly.
[n/a] Dovina @ 12.72.23.241 > INTRANSIT | 19-Mar-06/5:24 PM | Reply
Of course they do, unless you live in the backwoods of some northeastern state where snake oil and snake charming are both parts of divine healing. No, I meant "credentials" as in lines, i.e., "Your necklace looks expensive."
[9] ALChemy @ 24.74.100.11 | 20-Mar-06/10:40 AM | Reply
I really thought this might be a metaphor for something. On the other hand, you met a docta! Is he single? You could make your little jewish mutha so proud.
[n/a] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 > ALChemy | 20-Mar-06/10:58 AM | Reply
A metaphor if you wish. But to assert a little Jewish mutha or a single doctor who might have tried surgery - absurd!
[8] Caducus @ 86.144.226.63 | 21-Mar-06/4:56 AM | Reply
good to see a poem with an off kilter rhyme. I do it sometimes and it gets some peoples backs up but i like the modern age hippocrates goes philosophical thing.

[3] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 21-Mar-06/7:55 AM | Reply
I suggest you use a splint in the middle of the poem to try and hold this limp flaccid work together.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.217.160 | 21-Mar-06/1:06 PM | Reply
I know this is true because it happens on ER and Scrubs all the time.
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