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Words: lost in translation (Free verse) by fair12
Words; lost in translation some days I just want to read the words of others. Line by competent line I trace their words, their fiction that I fall into. moments in time but a bend of the arm, the soft flesh of a cheek, as my fingers pause to feel their velvet soul. sometimes their eyes hold sorrow as a lake in a thimble. as if the least bit of quivering will spill over the edge. their busy with their words; ancient text that eludes the scribes. but we find it, under the soft blue light of the dying where words spoken are but whispers of shuddering breath. and when I find that one poem, that small line, psalm or story, I return again and again, a lover revisited in the darkness of night. and as an unquenchable thirst builds in my chest, I am led, blindly in search of translation.

Up the ladder: We Are Born
Down the ladder: Post-mortem bordem

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2368
Posted: December 22, 2003 1:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2003 1:45 PM PST
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[10] sliver @ 63.189.17.188 | 22-Dec-03/9:18 PM | Reply
YES! That is how I feel reading Shelley and Wordsworth,and so many others, looking for those velvet words to caress my mind and soul as my own vacant words could never begin to do. Well done nice sentiment. A well deserved 10!
[9] richa @ 81.178.224.24 | 23-Dec-03/7:56 AM | Reply
very good, line breaks and fresh images on every line. My favourite is 'as a lake in a thimble'
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