replying on Getting Pumped Up to Get Laid by PodPoet
23 Feb 2005, 6:45 AM
What about lay'd and lade?
on Jack and Jill by Dovina
23 Feb 2005, 6:42 AM
Didja see the lawyer show where the guy killed someone and the whole reason behind the ordeal was he didn't get a date from some chick. In the meantime he became muslim (extremist) because they supposedly believe women are inferior. It was funny. And scary.
replying on Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT
19 Feb 2005, 7:39 AM
When I thought of it, I laughed too. Then a Grinch like grin came over me. But is it poetry? Would Ezra Pound laugh at it?
Or would he laugh at it.
Or would he laugh at it.
on If God Was a Nihilist by baughworm
19 Feb 2005, 5:40 AM
Seems to get rolling, then stalls. Encore? Maybe check the definition of nihilist. I'm not sure.
replying on Summing Up by Dovina
19 Feb 2005, 5:17 AM
Or just alter it a little. The major part suggests he's dead. The minor suggests he went to another woman. Wha'd you get?
on Brother's Egg Book by Jeremi B. Handrinos
19 Feb 2005, 5:15 AM
Something tells me this is a one-timer, pure. I'd leave it if it is.
replying on Garage sale by INTRANSIT
18 Feb 2005, 6:34 AM
Yes I did get your e-mail. Thank you. I'll hang on to it for future refrence should I look to try something different again.
How do I do it? Dunno really. Sometimes a picture pops into my head, possibly driven by whatever mood I'm in at the time, and I grab pen, scribble notes, and when I have more time I get out the curling iron, and brushes.
How do I do it? Dunno really. Sometimes a picture pops into my head, possibly driven by whatever mood I'm in at the time, and I grab pen, scribble notes, and when I have more time I get out the curling iron, and brushes.
replying on Garage sale by INTRANSIT
18 Feb 2005, 6:30 AM
No I don't suppose I need to draw a line along the boundary of sex considering it is such an old boundary. Avarice in fifty cents? Possibly. If your intention is do dispose of the ants and keep the rest. This doesn't sound like your style, D. As far as arrogance is concerned, I think it has little to do with writing good poetry. Thanks for the vote of confidence though.
replying on Garage sale by INTRANSIT
17 Feb 2005, 5:39 AM
As ususal. Women doing what they can to save the planet. Men and their deadly avarice. Ha!
on Lent Begins by jessicazee
16 Feb 2005, 3:35 PM
Yes JZ. Cruise control.
on Little Fly by PodPoet
16 Feb 2005, 3:04 PM
Kooky.
on A Sinnerâs Prayer by Dovina
16 Feb 2005, 2:59 PM
Howdy, D. Nice beat here. A serious answer to your question of why I left: I think my poetry sucks. No kidding. I'm just not measuring up to what I expect of myself. And now back to our regularly scheduled silliness:
I left because, in high school, I didn't get the safety program that went:
Bill got mixed up with the wrong internet crowd.
He wants to try poetry.
Careful, Bill, it's difficult.
No, Bill, you can't spondee! You'll hurt yourself!
Too bad for Bill.
No, I get the one: Bill wants to try Rachmaninoff.
Ok. I didn't get that one, but I did get the one that goes:
Bill wants to try Air-traffic-control.
Well, you can see where that led to.
I left because, in high school, I didn't get the safety program that went:
Bill got mixed up with the wrong internet crowd.
He wants to try poetry.
Careful, Bill, it's difficult.
No, Bill, you can't spondee! You'll hurt yourself!
Too bad for Bill.
No, I get the one: Bill wants to try Rachmaninoff.
Ok. I didn't get that one, but I did get the one that goes:
Bill wants to try Air-traffic-control.
Well, you can see where that led to.
on I Have... by SupremeDreamer
12 Dec 2004, 12:04 PM
At least they're talking to you. Either I've gone so horribly off track that no lifeline can reach, or I'm so accurate now no one can complain. I'm leaning on the former. Can I borrow some dope?
replying on Recognition by nentwined
7 Dec 2004, 3:21 PM
My wife just gave me an early birthday gift. A 1907 publishing of: Tennyson- Day by Day. I would suggest leaving "group" and indulging until your mind is bulging. I'm gong to slap myself now.
on Recognition by nentwined
7 Dec 2004, 10:09 AM
No amount of nonsensical smut -filled commenting could ever bring this poem down.
on Kaleidoscopic (Re-Edit) by Sasha
7 Dec 2004, 9:12 AM
photophobe-chuckle.