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20 most recent comments by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. (2161-2180) and replies

Re: Unholy War by marvelis 5-Mar-03/9:53 PM
Good effort! 3!*




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Re: Loud Taps by celiff 5-Mar-03/9:52 PM
Great! I love the way you take seemingly inert elements of nature and give them a vibrant personality! TOOT (Ten out of ten)!!!
Re: need of love by bxjay170 5-Mar-03/9:49 PM
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer!

Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
Re: Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow 5-Mar-03/9:43 PM
Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
Re: a comment on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos 5-Mar-03/9:40 PM
FUCKING TRICKED YOU
0 FOR YOU HANDRINOS
SUX 2 B U
Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos 5-Mar-03/9:39 PM
How fucking delightful! 4 for the poem, 5 for the charmingly witty and irreverent attitude, for a total of 9!!! (You earned it!!)
Re: Steel Wire Frame by celiff 5-Mar-03/9:35 PM
What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.

HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.

1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.

2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.

3. "To freely" is wrong.

4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.

5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.

6. Shut the fuck up.

7. It's "its", not "it's".

Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3 5-Mar-03/10:53 AM
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42580

Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL 5-Mar-03/8:01 AM
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU
Re: a comment on This Endless Soul by Ellie95 3-Mar-03/4:04 PM
Bollocks. They're split across half a dozen different accounts. You can't count them together.
Re: Fetish Section by vito0090 3-Mar-03/12:48 PM
whateva ho
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe 3-Mar-03/12:46 PM
I only have eyes for god'swife anyway. She's totally hot. Apparently she's really a man, but I don't really fucking care. Actually, I hope she is a man. Nothing says "HI!" like a cock.
Re: Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090 3-Mar-03/12:42 PM
If I had my druthers, everyone who used the phrase "if I had my druthers" would be stabbed in the groin and kicked down the stairs.
Re: This Endless Soul by Ellie95 3-Mar-03/12:41 PM
This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
Re: a comment on Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090 3-Mar-03/12:37 PM
For a minute I thought you said "it's a fact that men can't have ass babies no matter how hard they gay", and I was about to congratulate you on saying the best thing ever. Unfortunately what you actually said was rubbish.
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe 3-Mar-03/12:32 PM
You're a pretty funny guy, zero. Why don't you pull your fucking trousers up as high as they will go and then see who's fucking laughing?
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe 3-Mar-03/10:15 AM
Who fucking cares whether he "gets resepct"? THIS IS POEMRANKER. THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS IS THE RANKING OF THE POEMS.
Re: For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Mar-03/9:28 AM
fag
Re: G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah 3-Mar-03/9:19 AM
whateva ho
Re: Clown of Misery II by nocturnalism 28-Feb-03/4:50 AM
This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111


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