| Re: Unholy War by marvelis |
5-Mar-03/9:53 PM |
Good effort! 3!*
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| Re: Loud Taps by celiff |
5-Mar-03/9:52 PM |
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Great! I love the way you take seemingly inert elements of nature and give them a vibrant personality! TOOT (Ten out of ten)!!!
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| Re: need of love by bxjay170 |
5-Mar-03/9:49 PM |
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer!
Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
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| Re: Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow |
5-Mar-03/9:43 PM |
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Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
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| Re: a comment on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Mar-03/9:40 PM |
FUCKING TRICKED YOU
0 FOR YOU HANDRINOS
SUX 2 B U
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| Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Mar-03/9:39 PM |
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How fucking delightful! 4 for the poem, 5 for the charmingly witty and irreverent attitude, for a total of 9!!! (You earned it!!)
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| Re: Steel Wire Frame by celiff |
5-Mar-03/9:35 PM |
What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
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| Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3 |
5-Mar-03/10:53 AM |
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42580
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
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| Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL |
5-Mar-03/8:01 AM |
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU
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| Re: a comment on This Endless Soul by Ellie95 |
3-Mar-03/4:04 PM |
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Bollocks. They're split across half a dozen different accounts. You can't count them together.
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| Re: Fetish Section by vito0090 |
3-Mar-03/12:48 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe |
3-Mar-03/12:46 PM |
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I only have eyes for god'swife anyway. She's totally hot. Apparently she's really a man, but I don't really fucking care. Actually, I hope she is a man. Nothing says "HI!" like a cock.
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| Re: Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090 |
3-Mar-03/12:42 PM |
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If I had my druthers, everyone who used the phrase "if I had my druthers" would be stabbed in the groin and kicked down the stairs.
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| Re: This Endless Soul by Ellie95 |
3-Mar-03/12:41 PM |
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This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
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| Re: a comment on Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090 |
3-Mar-03/12:37 PM |
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For a minute I thought you said "it's a fact that men can't have ass babies no matter how hard they gay", and I was about to congratulate you on saying the best thing ever. Unfortunately what you actually said was rubbish.
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| Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe |
3-Mar-03/12:32 PM |
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You're a pretty funny guy, zero. Why don't you pull your fucking trousers up as high as they will go and then see who's fucking laughing?
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| Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe |
3-Mar-03/10:15 AM |
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Who fucking cares whether he "gets resepct"? THIS IS POEMRANKER. THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS IS THE RANKING OF THE POEMS.
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| Re: For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Mar-03/9:28 AM |
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| Re: G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah |
3-Mar-03/9:19 AM |
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| Re: Clown of Misery II by nocturnalism |
28-Feb-03/4:50 AM |
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This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
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