on need of love by bxjay170
5 Mar 2003, 9:49 PM
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer!
Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow
5 Mar 2003, 9:43 PM
Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
replying on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Mar 2003, 9:40 PM
FUCKING TRICKED YOU
0 FOR YOU HANDRINOS
SUX 2 B U
0 FOR YOU HANDRINOS
SUX 2 B U
on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Mar 2003, 9:39 PM
How fucking delightful! 4 for the poem, 5 for the charmingly witty and irreverent attitude, for a total of 9!!! (You earned it!!)
on Steel Wire Frame by celiff
5 Mar 2003, 9:35 PM
What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
on Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3
5 Mar 2003, 10:53 AM
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
replying on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
5 Mar 2003, 8:01 AM
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU
replying on This Endless Soul by Ellie95
3 Mar 2003, 4:04 PM
Bollocks. They're split across half a dozen different accounts. You can't count them together.
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:48 PM
whateva ho
on Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:42 PM
If I had my druthers, everyone who used the phrase "if I had my druthers" would be stabbed in the groin and kicked down the stairs.
on This Endless Soul by Ellie95
3 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM
This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
replying on Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:37 PM
For a minute I thought you said "it's a fact that men can't have ass babies no matter how hard they gay", and I was about to congratulate you on saying the best thing ever. Unfortunately what you actually said was rubbish.
on For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Mar 2003, 9:28 AM
fag
on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 9:19 AM
whateva ho
on Clown of Misery II by nocturnalism
28 Feb 2003, 4:50 AM
This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
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