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14-May-02/2:06 AM |
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Are you sure this isn't a Bryan Adams song?
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| Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight |
14-May-02/2:22 AM |
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I take it this is the resolution of your last poem? Equally great!
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| Re: Echoes by malakin |
14-May-02/6:58 AM |
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Well it was mostly awful... but I did like the fact that it was about minstrels. Four thumbs up!
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14-May-02/11:50 AM |
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Once upon a time I found some splat lying next to a tramp. My experience in such issues means I can really relate to this poem.
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| Re: Question of the day by PooP |
15-May-02/1:49 AM |
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Let x be this poem. Let A be the set of all awful poems. The intersection of A and {x} is not the empty set.
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| Re: Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation |
15-May-02/5:25 PM |
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I suggest that all poems containing the following words be deleted: dusk, dawn, moonlight, sunlight, sunsets, dew, mist and wind (unless preceded by the word break)
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| Re: Cancel that thought by wlshepherd |
15-May-02/5:32 PM |
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Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.
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| Re: Conquered Innocence by muted_screams |
17-May-02/8:45 AM |
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A lady should never pollute the world with wild and dangerous opinions of her own, but lowliness...lowliness is what she should strive for.
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| Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd |
17-May-02/9:09 AM |
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Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.
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| Re: Saturation Point by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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You can't serve charisma in a coffee cup. That's just wrong.
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| Re: New Rose by malakin |
21-May-02/2:10 PM |
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21-May-02/2:33 PM |
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this is not a good poem and you are not a good and that flourescence on my CRT screen was indeed crude.
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| Re: Wicked Danny, A Lesson For You All by ruella |
21-May-02/2:36 PM |
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22-May-02/5:22 AM |
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A very profound and deep piece. However, I do suggest you change "winter" to "winturd" and "light" to "shite".
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| Re: Spring Haiku by Staika |
22-May-02/5:26 AM |
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Nice one! I love the use of the words "spring" and "dusk". I've never seen those in a poem before!
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22-May-02/4:28 PM |
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You must be referring to a certain scene in Mulholland Drive. Indeed, Trapped in Beige Curtains was written the day after I saw that film. It was also written the day after I dreamt that I was trapped in some beige curtains. I HAVE YET TO AWAKEN FROM THAT DREAM.
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23-May-02/10:06 AM |
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| Re: Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella |
23-May-02/10:18 AM |
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This is the best poem ever. Please submit more.
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| Re: Economics 499 by ErgoErgun |
23-May-02/10:48 AM |
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Nice allegory of economics! No, wait, it's crap!
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24-May-02/7:09 AM |
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Simply awful. I have to say that the rest of the people who use this site are getting pretty sick of you Settle. After reading this rather crude "poeme", I'm beginning to think that perhaps you're not yet old enough to play with the bigger boys. Might I suggest you read something by Edgar Allan Poo?
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