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24-May-02/10:51 AM |
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You know, ruella, that's just the kind of prejudice my poeme is trying to address. Dwarves are not just characters in fantasy novels. They are real people like you and me.... well not like me... And let's face it: they haven't evolved properly, have they?
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26-May-02/5:44 AM |
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Your racist poeme chilled me to the core. How dare you refer to black people as black. I think you'll find the preferred nomenclature is African American. How dare you!
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26-May-02/5:55 AM |
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I hope you are weeping with naughtiness, my child. For a census taker once asked me if I thought homosexuals should be allowed in the Boy Scouts. I told him that homosexuals were gay. Perhaps it is you who is the one who is gay?
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| Re: Anger Management by wlshepherd |
26-May-02/9:23 AM |
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Yes. Perspective. Yes. There are so many issues out there. Like abortion, nudity, poverty and nudity to name but a few. I guess we all need a little perspective from time to time, right guys!?
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26-May-02/10:33 AM |
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I agree with Poetie. This poeme is awful. Why not check out my work. I'm sure you'll find it far more tasteful.
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26-May-02/10:36 AM |
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A "simple mis-understanding", eh? Why don't we see what the F.B.I thinks about this matter!
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26-May-02/10:46 AM |
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The third verse is excellent! "A rodent hybernates and gets fat"... genius.Ten thumbs up!
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| Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav |
26-May-02/11:48 AM |
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| Re: in love with jane doe by crin |
26-May-02/11:49 AM |
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You're poem is sure great!!
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| Re: The Green by Syr Charles |
26-May-02/11:49 AM |
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Well it's tough being a loser. I feel your pain. Why not add something about searching and vampyres?
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| Re: The Last Battle by seebergerb |
26-May-02/11:50 AM |
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What's a 'cloisture'? Good use of the word 'like'! Sometimes metaphor can be too strong, can't it?
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| Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky |
26-May-02/11:54 AM |
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This is the sound of my eyes bursting.
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27-May-02/9:29 AM |
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Tell me, Settle: What's it like living on Chode Island?
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27-May-02/9:43 AM |
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Do you know why you couldn't think of a title for this "poeme"? Not because it is so profound that it defies any sort of label. No. It has no title because it isn't about anything in particular. It's just a load of vague, half-baked drivel that rhymes. Great, nevertheless! P.S "leather" not "lether", "screaming" not "screeming", "abandoned" not "abanndoned" and "homemade" not "homeade".
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27-May-02/9:56 PM |
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The most worthwhile thing I've ever done is writing this: You smell
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27-May-02/10:07 PM |
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Read "The Bible" by Edgar Allen Poe
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27-May-02/10:11 PM |
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| Re: Dancing with the Dandelions by Piano |
28-May-02/12:43 PM |
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The only dance you shall be dancing is the hideous dance of shame. Now put on your cloggs and begin.
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28-May-02/3:19 PM |
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Yeah well you are truly, profoundly returded. Check mate I believe.
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28-May-02/4:34 PM |
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They killed Americans? Well killing those damned foreignors I could understand but Americans!? They sure gotta get their priorities straight! PS This doesn't even come close to being a Haiku.
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