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28-May-02/4:37 PM |
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I might say the same about you. In fact, I will: you could at least write a poem that doesn't make people gag when they read it. I have never read such a hackneyed load of intentionally-homespun platitudes as your odes to banality. If you're as good at expressing yourself as you claim, then I suggest you join a fantasy-memory support group and live out your dreams of imagined fried chicken smells away from people who don't want to read about some generic dullard's meaningless opinion of their completely featureless childhood.
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| Re: Dancing with the Dandelions by Piano |
29-May-02/3:07 AM |
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Actually I did not submit a vote for your poeme. The '1' you got must have been provided by someone else. Get your facts straight before you ruthlessly accuse innocent Americans of giving your wonderful poemes naughty marks.
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30-May-02/4:48 AM |
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Do you think it's naughty to swear?
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel=- by waltfreakinwhitman |
30-May-02/12:37 PM |
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Yes. I did inhale deeply when the brown pickle was placed before me. And what of it? You would have done the same in my position! Oh jesu what have I done...
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| Re: The Plum by ruella |
30-May-02/12:43 PM |
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Mine would too... but only if I ate alphabet soup.
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| Re: fuck you by gsosville |
31-May-02/8:52 PM |
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I don't like this poeme. I think it's mean.
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31-May-02/8:56 PM |
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Yeah, school's great! You get to meet interesting new people and get lots of time to work at your studies!
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31-May-02/9:16 PM |
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She may have been young, but Jesu knew that she deserved to die. The Lord receiveth and the Lord taketh away my child.
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1-Jun-02/7:08 AM |
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Think on this: what if your dream is for none of your dreams to come true? Ahhhhhh...
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1-Jun-02/9:51 AM |
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1-Jun-02/9:54 AM |
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This poeme really helped me to face the facts.
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| Re: Icon by timfowler |
2-Jun-02/12:29 PM |
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This poeme reminds me of very olde poemes that were written many years ago. Do you like writing olde poetry?
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| Re: Nyctophobia by crims0ngh0st |
2-Jun-02/3:04 PM |
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I fear that you have become some sort of gothic, nocturnal rodent.
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| Re: Icon by timfowler |
4-Jun-02/3:31 PM |
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Keep telling yourself that, my child.
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4-Jun-02/4:26 PM |
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That is the shittest possible insult you could have brought forth. It's like when allegedly tough police officers in made-for-TV police dramas call someone a 'scumbag.' Oh, fuck, you called me a scumbag. Oh no, 'fucking sucks pondwater.' Pondwater? Oh fuck! Pondwater! Good one! Nice one! You must be really intelligent to invent such original, telling insults! There's nothing more disgusting than pondwater, is there, you failure? You make me sick. You really thought that by telling someone their poeme sucked pondwater you'd be mystifying them or showing them that you lived on a higher plane of existence where catchiness in insults didn't matter, didn't you? Well, you were fucking wrong. I hate you. Everyone hates you. Your pathetic attempt to hurt the world of poemeranker by writing the adolescent load of shite that is 'fuck you' is truly the most amazingly predictable thing I have ever seen in my life. Also, you have AIDS, you fucking diseased little man.
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4-Jun-02/4:30 PM |
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Will you just shut the fuck up, "markwells"? Your poems are just unstructured, pubescent, wrong observations about inconsequential and completely uninteresting things. You use words at random in a misguided attempt to create poetic effects. You make metaphor a shameful business. Please read some poetry that was written in the last 10 years. Good day to you, Sir.
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| Re: poetry by nrevatehtni |
4-Jun-02/4:36 PM |
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This defines "fuck off, you're shit at poetry".
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| Re: The Advice by T. Becquerel |
4-Jun-02/4:36 PM |
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| Re: poetry by nrevatehtni |
5-Jun-02/9:56 AM |
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Yeah well, inthetavern, I suppose you think you're pretty damn smooth for having a name that's spelt backwards. Oh and by the way: at least I don't smell.
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5-Jun-02/3:52 PM |
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This is a poeme about reality. This is a poeme about issues. I heartily recommend you read it!
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