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-=Dark_Angel=- (Lyric) by waltfreakinwhitman
-=Dark_Angel=- sniffs the big brown pickle with gusto and enthusiasm -=Dark_Angel=- will smoke your sausage* for a dollar or a cigarette -=Dark_Angel=- will gargle your nards on a winter night just to keep his face warm Chug it well, -=Dark_Angel=-, Chug it well *(pronounced saw-SEEJ')

Up the ladder: Zen
Down the ladder: cylinder

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.352941
Weighted score: 5.3108697
Overall Rank: 3584
Posted: May 30, 2002 10:34 AM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2002 10:44 AM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 30-May-02/12:37 PM | Reply
Yes. I did inhale deeply when the brown pickle was placed before me. And what of it? You would have done the same in my position! Oh jesu what have I done...
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 30-May-02/7:42 PM | Reply
cute.
[1] Roisin @ 80.225.66.76 | 9-Jul-02/12:13 PM | Reply
INSANE!!!!bUT FUNNY
[n/a] brazen @ 12.90.36.128 | 16-Aug-02/10:59 AM | Reply
i'm sensing a lot of negative energy hear...lets just clear this up for everyone...-=Dark_Angel=- BRIDGES his mental images into poetic words...good job

walt whitman (for those of you familar with the philly area) BRIDGES pennsylvania to new jersey...i wish there was less of those.
[10] Blindproject217 @ 68.86.0.162 | 2-Apr-03/9:14 PM | Reply
A masterpiece, keep trashin people in hilarious ways, -10-
[7] lunar @ 195.92.67.71 | 12-Apr-03/6:32 AM | Reply
in-ter-est-ing.
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