poemranker ::20 most recent comments by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. (1321-1340)

Comments by-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I., 1321–1340 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 12 Sep 2002, 2:29 PM
LOL WELL THAT SURE WAS FUNNY!!!!!
on Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh 12 Sep 2002, 7:26 AM
I think you've been reading too many lyrics.
on some deleted poem 12 Sep 2002, 12:08 PM
You obviously haven't spent much time on this. It fails in at least three and a half different ways. The Duke will be most disappointed.
on want it by sontei 11 Sep 2002, 6:44 PM
Expand upon the second stanza. I am intrigued as to how the suggestion of nudity pans out!
Well fuck me, it's another 20-page drug-addled discharge from the master of meaningless crypticism. Great one! I'm sure all your fans will come all over it!

I used to actually try to understand what the hell you were talking about. But there is far too much random bullcrap to bother trying to glean the nuggets of wisdom you seem to think you have. I bet if you shortened your public therapy sessions by about 70% a lot more people would be willing to actually read them and take them seriously. And so sayeth -=Plumpkin=-.
on Pigeons by Limness 11 Sep 2002, 9:04 AM
Old man with paper bag feeding pigeons. Did you make that up yourself?!?!?!?!?!?1?!/!?!/!11 also, I don't understand how "wakes him" follows from "st marks bells toll the matins". Is there supposed to be some sort of punctuation there?
on Gone Away by Christof 11 Sep 2002, 9:13 AM
I would like this poeme more if you didn't capitalise all the words at the beginning of a line. It makes it seem 10 times more portentous than it actually is. Also, the second verse is unpleasant to read.
on some deleted poem 10 Sep 2002, 2:41 PM
That's so beautiful. I think it's as true today as it was last Thanksgiving.
on Putney at Low Tide by Christof 10 Sep 2002, 9:57 AM
Who would have thought a poeme containing the word 'beshitten' could be so beautiful? NOT ME THAT'S FOR SURE!!!!!11 But seriously Christof, you couldn't make the first eight if your buttocks depended on it! Which, judging by their flabbiness, they obviously do. 10/10!
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 9 Sep 2002, 5:39 PM
What are you trying to say here?
on Don't Wanna Know by nightii 8 Sep 2002, 3:32 PM
I see you've been censoring your poeme's comments. Great job! Keep it up!
on Don't Wanna Know by nightii 7 Sep 2002, 7:03 PM
I think you'd better take a look at some REAL poetry, my lad. My masterpiece, AIDS in a Van, would be a splendid place to start. You'll find it in the 'Worst' section. Do have a lovely day!
on Don't Wanna Know by nightii 7 Sep 2002, 7:20 PM
Hyuk hyuk!! I guess you sure got me there! What was I thinking calling my poeme a "masterpiece" when it's in the "worst" section?!?! rofl asl?
on Untitled # 93 by nightii 8 Sep 2002, 7:53 PM
The children mentioned have nothing to do with it, do they? You just said 'children' to make it more profou^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hsorry I'm not supposed to comment on your poemes.
Goodness! Where can I purchase such a flashlight?
on some deleted poem 7 Sep 2002, 8:00 PM
Is that a technical term? Is it related to 'emo' music (i.e. 'cheerful' music with 'unhappy' lyrics)?
on Don't Wanna Know by nightii 7 Sep 2002, 7:24 PM
katie: Would you mind addressing me as "-=Dark_Angel=-"? It's just that -- well, I went to the trouble of getting it legally changed, and it hurts when people don't put all the characters in it or abbreviate it. Thanks!
on Thank You Mom by savannah 9 Sep 2002, 6:14 PM
NO PROBLEM, SAVANNAH!!1
on The Writing Life by poetandknowit 11 Sep 2002, 9:40 AM
I feel that the "#3" really adds a true taste of the writer's life. Excellent work.
on At the Olde Absinthe by Limness 11 Sep 2002, 9:23 AM
This poeme is dandy.