Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii	7-Sep-02/7:03 PM
I think you'd better take a look at some REAL poetry, my lad. My masterpiece, AIDS in a Van, would be a splendid place to start. You'll find it in the 'Worst' section. Do have a lovely day!
Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii	7-Sep-02/7:20 PM
Hyuk hyuk!! I guess you sure got me there! What was I thinking calling my poeme a "masterpiece" when it's in the "worst" section?!?! rofl asl?
Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii	7-Sep-02/7:24 PM
katie: Would you mind addressing me as "-=Dark_Angel=-"? It's just that -- well, I went to the trouble of getting it legally changed, and it hurts when people don't put all the characters in it or abbreviate it. Thanks!
Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism	7-Sep-02/7:37 PM
Goodness! Where can I purchase such a flashlight?
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Sep-02/8:00 PM
Is that a technical term? Is it related to 'emo' music (i.e. 'cheerful' music with 'unhappy' lyrics)?
Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii	8-Sep-02/3:32 PM
I see you've been censoring your poeme's comments. Great job! Keep it up!
Re: Untitled # 93 by nightii	8-Sep-02/7:53 PM
The children mentioned have nothing to do with it, do they? You just said 'children' to make it more profou^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hsorry I'm not supposed to comment on your poemes.
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	9-Sep-02/5:39 PM
What are you trying to say here?
Re: Thank You Mom by savannah	9-Sep-02/6:14 PM
NO PROBLEM, SAVANNAH!!1
Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof	10-Sep-02/9:57 AM
Who would have thought a poeme containing the word 'beshitten' could be so beautiful? NOT ME THAT'S FOR SURE!!!!!11 But seriously Christof, you couldn't make the first eight if your buttocks depended on it! Which, judging by their flabbiness, they obviously do. 10/10!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Sep-02/2:41 PM
That's so beautiful. I think it's as true today as it was last Thanksgiving.
Re: Pigeons by Limness	11-Sep-02/9:04 AM
Old man with paper bag feeding pigeons. Did you make that up yourself?!?!?!?!?!?1?!/!?!/!11 also, I don't understand how "wakes him" follows from "st marks bells toll the matins". Is there supposed to be some sort of punctuation there?
Re: Gone Away by Christof	11-Sep-02/9:13 AM
I would like this poeme more if you didn't capitalise all the words at the beginning of a line. It makes it seem 10 times more portentous than it actually is. Also, the second verse is unpleasant to read.
Re: Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8	11-Sep-02/9:20 AM
Well fuck me, it's another 20-page drug-addled discharge from the master of meaningless crypticism. Great one! I'm sure all your fans will come all over it! I used to actually try to understand what the hell you were talking about. But there is far too much random bullcrap to bother trying to glean the nuggets of wisdom you seem to think you have. I bet if you shortened your public therapy sessions by about 70% a lot more people would be willing to actually read them and take them seriously. And so sayeth -=Plumpkin=-.
Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness	11-Sep-02/9:23 AM
This poeme is dandy.
Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit	11-Sep-02/9:40 AM
I feel that the "#3" really adds a true taste of the writer's life. Excellent work.
Re: want it by sontei	11-Sep-02/6:44 PM
Expand upon the second stanza. I am intrigued as to how the suggestion of nudity pans out!
Re: Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh	12-Sep-02/7:26 AM
I think you've been reading too many lyrics.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-02/12:08 PM
You obviously haven't spent much time on this. It fails in at least three and a half different ways. The Duke will be most disappointed.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-02/2:29 PM
LOL WELL THAT SURE WAS FUNNY!!!!!