Re: Old Friends by sliver |
7-Sep-05/1:14 AM |
Great poem I love it!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined |
7-Sep-05/1:16 AM |
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Re: Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent |
7-Sep-05/1:17 AM |
Very good. Are we split personality???
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regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Sep-05/9:59 PM |
Wow what do I say a bit difficult to understand or grasp but i'll give you credit at least a little
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Re: Generations by Revekka |
10-Sep-05/10:57 PM |
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Re: proverbs by Montinequego |
10-Sep-05/10:58 PM |
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Re: For you by Montinequego |
10-Sep-05/11:06 PM |
I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I CANT HELP FEELING LIKE I HAVE READ SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR BEFORE
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Re: Tears and Tombstones by OnTheOtherHand |
10-Sep-05/11:09 PM |
Very nice although I think you could have thought of a better line for "They always want a personal account of Hell"
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Re: A Song for the Street by Numen |
10-Sep-05/11:12 PM |
Wow-u need not say any more
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Re: No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha |
10-Sep-05/11:26 PM |
I actually like this one. Not that this matters to you. I know that my "teenage like writting style" isn't what you would consider to be of any valute. So I highly doubt you will care to hear sugg. I might have regarding this poem
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Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
11-Sep-05/6:35 AM |
I can't seem to find the right words to describe what I am feeling after reading this.............Bravo!!!!
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Re: i need a title by That One |
11-Sep-05/6:37 AM |
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Re: hate by ts |
11-Sep-05/6:45 AM |
I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors
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Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger |
11-Sep-05/8:51 PM |
Very nice work, it flows rather smoothly
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Re: Lullaby by Goad |
11-Sep-05/8:56 PM |
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Re: (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined |
11-Sep-05/8:58 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Sep-05/3:32 PM |
What type of poem is this suppose to be?
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Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
17-Sep-05/3:35 PM |
I'm not really getting it. Nor am I really liking it.
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Re: remembering you by sapphire_rain7 |
17-Sep-05/3:36 PM |
I think this is rather good!
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Re: Regrets, No More by writteninskin |
17-Sep-05/3:40 PM |
I like this one regardless of your other comments you have recieved. Don't listen to all the negative remarks take anything constructive that they might add and leave the rest of the bull shit behind. Otherwise you will get to the point that you never will want to pick up the pencil again.
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