| Re: The Blood Of Life by eros |
6-Sep-05/2:27 AM |
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Wow quite shakesperean or something along those lines a little much if you ask me
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| Re: Pathological by Miggy |
6-Sep-05/2:31 AM |
This is absolutley beautiful!!!!!
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.
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| Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined |
6-Sep-05/2:31 AM |
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| Re: That Girl Before by Miggy |
6-Sep-05/2:32 AM |
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| Re: making progress (a piece of it) by Limness |
6-Sep-05/2:33 AM |
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Very good- I am impressed!
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| Re: One Week Ago by Miggy |
6-Sep-05/2:36 AM |
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I'm not really into the type of song i'm hearing in my head as im reading this like it is some pop song but it sounds like it could be playing on the radio. Good job you could have something here
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| Re: B-Side by Miggy |
6-Sep-05/2:37 AM |
sounds like something my ex would write
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| Re: ANALYZE THIS by drnick |
6-Sep-05/2:38 AM |
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| Re: Meta by nentwined |
6-Sep-05/2:40 AM |
Wow that was a tounge twister
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
6-Sep-05/2:46 AM |
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This poem is absolutley beautiful. I love it!
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| Re: Shoestring Salutation by MacFrantic |
6-Sep-05/2:48 AM |
Good a little differnt but I think I get were you are going with this one
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| Re: Dale by INTRANSIT |
6-Sep-05/2:50 AM |
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| Re: Stranger by MacFrantic |
6-Sep-05/2:51 AM |
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What is this about is the guy getting fucked?
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| Re: Steal my heart by baby_d |
6-Sep-05/2:53 AM |
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Really cute need to work on ending verse
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| Re: Hmm... by tre |
6-Sep-05/2:53 AM |
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| Re: I don't know by Chasz Misleading |
6-Sep-05/2:54 AM |
I don't no either iver read better ive read worst good job
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Sep-05/11:40 PM |
Im sorry this is not really the type of poem that is meant for a ignorant teenage viewer like myself maybe you could come up with something a bit more oh lets see why don't you just use someone elses poem and throw a few new words in it to make it yours
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
6-Sep-05/11:43 PM |
I'm sorry how old were you when you wrote this?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Sep-05/1:12 AM |
I think you could have put a lot more into this poem.
If this really happened I am sorry for your loss.
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