on I don't know by Chasz Misleading
6 Sep 2005, 2:54 AM
I don't no either iver read better ive read worst good job
on The Blood Of Life by eros
6 Sep 2005, 2:27 AM
Wow quite shakesperean or something along those lines a little much if you ask me
on Pathological by Miggy
6 Sep 2005, 2:31 AM
This is absolutley beautiful!!!!!
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
6 Sep 2005, 2:31 AM
Cute I like it!
on That Girl Before by Miggy
6 Sep 2005, 2:32 AM
Needs something----
on making progress (a piece of it) by Limness
6 Sep 2005, 2:33 AM
Very good- I am impressed!
on One Week Ago by Miggy
6 Sep 2005, 2:36 AM
I'm not really into the type of song i'm hearing in my head as im reading this like it is some pop song but it sounds like it could be playing on the radio. Good job you could have something here
on ANALYZE THIS by drnick
6 Sep 2005, 2:38 AM
A bit angry are we?
on Shoestring Salutation by MacFrantic
6 Sep 2005, 2:48 AM
Good a little differnt but I think I get were you are going with this one
on Stranger by MacFrantic
6 Sep 2005, 2:51 AM
What is this about is the guy getting fucked?
on Steal my heart by baby_d
6 Sep 2005, 2:53 AM
Really cute need to work on ending verse
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2005, 11:40 PM
Im sorry this is not really the type of poem that is meant for a ignorant teenage viewer like myself maybe you could come up with something a bit more oh lets see why don't you just use someone elses poem and throw a few new words in it to make it yours
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Sep 2005, 11:43 PM
I'm sorry how old were you when you wrote this?
If this really happened I am sorry for your loss.