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ANALYZE THIS (Free verse) by drnick
Fuck this shit, I don't even care. I hope I get the worst, Cuz when I hope for the best... I get the worst. So bring it motherfucker, I hope you hate the way I talk, And the words I use. I hope you like my spelling and punctuation too!?$#%@% So take this poem... Turn it s i d e ways, And shove it up your ass, I know soemthing this shitty Will never make some cash

Up the ladder: Now I'm with you
Down the ladder: Basic comedy

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10807
Posted: September 5, 2005 11:10 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2005 11:10 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] Heather Dee @ 63.17.24.26 | 6-Sep-05/2:38 AM | Reply
A bit angry are we?
[1] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 7-Sep-05/6:47 PM | Reply
ummmmmm....
[1] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.130 | 7-Sep-05/7:38 PM | Reply
If this had turned out to be an acrostic, it would have been brilliant. As it is...
[n/a] drnick @ 24.176.22.254 > Tintagiles | 7-Sep-05/11:15 PM | Reply
It is, just in a language yet to be created.
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