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That Girl Before (Lyric) by Miggy
I can’t stand being with a liar Nor won’t take a blubbering crier Who’d play this out like a simple game And the deadly use of your words Got to the edge of my nerves When you ended it with me to blame Did you ever care about me? Did you ever care about me? (Chorus) So run away with my heart and the goods Your lies would burn and you’ll eventually lose I thought you would complete my every need Instead you darkened the bottom of my hole Just the fact that you didn’t believe in me Made me wish I never lost that girl before I cheated on her without a doubt Look where it brought me right about now I guess I should have saw this coming At least she had all the dignity To tell her mind with honesty And to keep our bond with everything At least she always would care At least she always would care (Chorus) Being with you left me breathless But losing her took away my air So I might as well be left to die Without having that other girl by my side (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: A gift

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 6.1009965
Overall Rank: 1132
Posted: June 18, 2004 6:56 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2004 6:56 PM PDT
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Comments:
[2] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 18-Jun-04/9:44 PM | Reply
I tried to read this as a poem and found that it just didn't work. It maybe a good song for all I know, I didn't have the music though.
[10] deleted user @ 205.188.116.84 | 23-Jun-04/2:54 PM | Reply
awesome
[1] Drunk Russian Poet @ 24.176.102.131 > deleted user | 24-Jun-04/8:57 PM | Reply
second that.
[4] Heather Dee @ 63.17.24.26 | 6-Sep-05/2:32 AM | Reply
Needs something----
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