on Tangled web. by darby pyn
3 Aug 2005, 10:43 AM
Chilling yet very revealing...Bethy
on Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick
3 Aug 2005, 10:46 AM
Sounds like an escape from the reality of Divorce...been there... Bethy
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2005, 10:56 AM
YUP!!!
on The Edge is Better Blue by D. $ Fontera
5 Aug 2005, 6:50 AM
there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
on Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher
5 Aug 2005, 6:54 AM
I love this...so imaginative and creative...I think I peeeeeed myself... Bethy :)
on Mavis Beacon, Human. by Crann Mascher
5 Aug 2005, 7:00 AM
Are you accepting any patients...sometimes I just need to spit it all out there...lol...boy do I need to get away...I got the single Mom syndrome blues...hmmm sounds like another poem for me...lol
Excellent!! Bethy
Excellent!! Bethy
on A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher
5 Aug 2005, 7:02 AM
I love your poetry...your my hero...LOL Bethy :)
on Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp
3 Aug 2005, 3:16 PM
Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2005, 3:35 PM
not many poems make me read it like going to a movie...yours did...great movie... :)
on On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic
3 Aug 2005, 3:38 PM
I think limerick,s are funny and yours are fun...wtg :)
on untitled by AaronJKeating
3 Aug 2005, 3:43 PM
YES!!!
on Drops of Pain by PoeticOne
3 Aug 2005, 3:24 PM
The only thing I have to offer for a comment is...I have chocolate..and am willing to share... :)
on No More Tomorrows by PoeticOne
3 Aug 2005, 3:28 PM
This is good...hmmmm sadness,hurt,pain,lost love...yup...all the right ingredients to make me feel this poem... :)
on Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222
4 Aug 2005, 12:01 PM
good one :)
on Never born. by | Broken |
4 Aug 2005, 12:08 PM
very deep...
Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do...
Good poem
Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do...
Good poem
on Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp
4 Aug 2005, 1:47 PM
WOW!!! excellent ! Now you got me thinking... Ok...there is no beginning and there is no end :)
on THINK ABOUT ME by prettyktm
4 Aug 2005, 2:47 PM
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather...
good poem...Bethy :)
good poem...Bethy :)