| Re: Tangled web. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/7:03 AM |
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I had to read this poem a couple of times...but I like it...Bethy
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| Re: Not in The Classroom by Gbaddy Faggy |
5-Aug-05/7:06 AM |
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I love the word...unperturbed...Bethy :)
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| Re: You can never go back! by pennymarie |
5-Aug-05/7:09 AM |
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Think before you speak, right...or just think it really loud in your head !!! Bravo,good one! Bethy :)
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| Re: In My Words by RGSsparky |
5-Aug-05/7:11 AM |
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| Re: All are welcomed. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/11:44 AM |
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Holy frig...lol...I had to get me a dictionary for some of them big words...but it works for me...awesome...I think like you write...lol...ooops just had an insane moment...lol Bethy:)
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| Re: Iâd Kill Your Dog For Respect by Crann Mascher |
5-Aug-05/11:51 AM |
lost for words here...but... yep I like this poem...
Bethy :)
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| Re: The Beatles by i_am_the_popsicle |
5-Aug-05/2:39 PM |
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We all live in a yellow submarine...I,ll see you there...people have become too lost in what is not available...Good poem... Bethy :)
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| Re: first poem of the new year by that_funny_girl |
5-Aug-05/3:10 PM |
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ummmmm you wrote this poem...thats a great start...
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| Re: The One by RGSsparky |
5-Aug-05/8:27 PM |
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very nice...sweet actually...Bethy:)
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| Re: Fairies by whispern_smoke_wisp |
5-Aug-05/8:35 PM |
when I was a little girl, my grams said if you look very carefully you can see where the faries have hung out their laundry all over the lawn...and sure enough I did...of course now I tell my little girl the same...look in the morning where the dew hangs on little spider webs...it looks like canopys of laundry...
Beautiful...thanks for bringing back an old memory :) :) Bethy
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| Re: Philosophy King by crooked_smile |
5-Aug-05/8:37 PM |
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I like this...many different meanings...for me...of course, I am deep anyway..lol
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| Re: Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher |
5-Aug-05/8:40 PM |
I have read this poem 4 times...it sounds really neat...then you loose me...I think I might be thinking to much...you think...
Sounds like your argeuing with yourself...Bethy:)
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| Re: War by zodiac |
6-Aug-05/4:52 AM |
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I knew it was about your wife...good wives like to keep alot of one or two things just incase there is a bread shortage...yeast being one of them lol...you made me look in my cupboards to see what I have ALOT of lol...looks like its jello and macaroni..I love this poem...
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| Re: Megan by RaVensEternalFire |
6-Aug-05/5:20 AM |
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I like your last few lines...good poem...Bethy :)
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| Re: forwards by nentwined |
6-Aug-05/5:22 AM |
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...so tightly curled and twisted...I like this line...I like this poem...Bethy:)
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 |
6-Aug-05/3:17 PM |
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! i love it...its like trying to fart, when you have diarrhea...so complicated, yet so simple...*9*
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 |
6-Aug-05/3:23 PM |
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OR...this is real and I am soooooooo OSI (out in space) that I need a direct shuttle too...what was I saying...lol Bethy:) its still a nine!
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| Re: Waiting Room by jessicazee |
7-Aug-05/5:48 AM |
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this is great!!! I love it... Bethy :)
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| Re: Prayer 2M by peahunky |
7-Aug-05/5:51 AM |
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7-Aug-05/9:58 AM |
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I totally love this poem...excellent!!!
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