on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2005, 11:47 AM
cause and affect...:) Bethy
on Storm Damage by Caducus
17 Aug 2005, 11:50 AM
Verry Good....:) Bethy
on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle
17 Aug 2005, 12:01 PM
With the changing seasons, your spirit dies then is reborn...its sad, but then if we could all be little orange flowers...we could refresh ourselves seasonally and be new again...sounds good eh...lol :) :) Bethy
on Puck by whispern_smoke_wisp
17 Aug 2005, 12:04 PM
hehehe...I made a mistake once...but I was wrong...lol cool poem :) Bethy
on The burden of faith by Bobjim
17 Aug 2005, 12:10 PM
Yes, God did enter my mind...but I was kinda thinking about my Dad...:) Bethy
on The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000
17 Aug 2005, 12:14 PM
good poem...how about this for a last line...
In the life hereafter...;)
I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy
In the life hereafter...;)
I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy
on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim
18 Aug 2005, 3:46 PM
Beautiful...gave me goose bumps...it reminds me of someone I know...:) Bethy
on Playing The Vibes by impert&ent
18 Aug 2005, 3:48 PM
verrrry good...:) Bethy
on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT
18 Aug 2005, 3:50 PM
sounds like me when I think in my car...with no pen...and a poem in my thoughts...lol :) Bethy
on Surveyor and Farmer by Dovina
18 Aug 2005, 3:53 PM
I like this one Dovina...secret encounters are fun...lol...:) Bethy
on Chocolate Bunny by not_a_philosopher
20 Aug 2005, 2:31 PM
hehehehahahahaha!!! ha... I like your mind...:) Bethy
on The Giant Verse by drnick
20 Aug 2005, 2:38 PM
this is great...Bethy :)
on Night Shift by ALChemy
21 Aug 2005, 10:32 AM
EXCELLENT!!!
on Salvatore Quasimodo: Agrigentum Road by Sasha
21 Aug 2005, 12:16 PM
Lets read something you wrote...and not a translation...I know this is written in your words, and it is a great...but lets see your own work...:) Bethy
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2005, 4:44 AM
Birth...this is fantastic...:) Bethy *9*
on Silence by crooked_smile
24 Aug 2005, 4:47 AM
Beautiful...*10* and a fav for me...:)Bethy
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2005, 4:49 AM
I am thinking mermaid...nice...:)Bethy
on some deleted poem
23 Aug 2005, 5:38 PM
Hey I think I'll call Phil...lol...I need some repairs...:) Bethy
on Leaving the Woods House by zodiac
24 Aug 2005, 4:53 AM
dang..I feel like moving...hehehehaha!!!:)Bethy