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Looking for someone (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
I want to share my Buffalo nickels and toothpaste build underground billboards with you Pull the cord when you get hit by rain Be the golden catfish on my arm! We'll take back things we haven't bought and look for all our lost pens. If you promise not to steal the white van we can practice medicine cure snakebite. Just sign my back. I'm ready again for Intercontinental beer and buffalo wings.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8232
Posted: August 17, 2005 3:10 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2005 11:26 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 18-Aug-05/10:24 AM | Reply
How about simply, "A Letter To Anyone"? Or is it to someone? Must be to someone, because there must be some ones you would not want as golden catfish on you arms. I like looking for all our lost pens.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.138 > Dovina | 18-Aug-05/11:28 AM | Reply
yah. I really wanted this to have more but it came on strong and then petered out on me I hate it when that happens.
[9] Bethy @ 24.222.32.246 | 18-Aug-05/3:50 PM | Reply
sounds like me when I think in my car...with no pen...and a poem in my thoughts...lol :) Bethy
[n/a] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 19-Aug-05/6:49 AM | Reply
Somewhere in a trailer along the backroads of West Virginia a woman eagerly awaits to hear these very words.
[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 > ALChemy | 19-Aug-05/12:17 PM | Reply
He needs better directions. Perhaps the name of the hollar.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.198 > Dovina | 19-Aug-05/3:28 PM | Reply
For the first time in a long time here at p/r, I'm hurt.
Serves me right for writing poetry. . . . .full stop
[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 > INTRANSIT | 19-Aug-05/3:59 PM | Reply
No, please don't stop. I'm sure you can find her. I'm only worried about those tight turns in the ruts of West Virginia and that some of your eighteen wheels could get stuck.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.198 > Dovina | 19-Aug-05/6:13 PM | Reply
See "Amputee" it's basically this poems predecessor.
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