Re: It Could Be Worse by smiffy84	18-Jun-05/5:03 PM
Blair Witched?
Re: All in Love by gothiclovepoetiss	18-Jun-05/11:05 PM
sometimes feelings lie
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Jun-05/11:07 PM
I remember the swap meet over on Slawson.
Re: grin and stand by celticskatermatt1	19-Jun-05/5:46 PM
spell check.
Re: Father’s Day by Dovina	19-Jun-05/7:17 PM
I disagree with your premise. I am sorry you aren't aware of many old men that don't fit this stereotype. I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
Re: Being Alone by Sunshine Conkey	19-Jun-05/7:33 PM
I was trying to figure out the rhyme scheme. I see in the first two stanzas you rhyme lines 2 and 4. Then a five line 5th stanza with a rhyme in lines 3 and 4. was this the plan?
Re: Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce	19-Jun-05/7:41 PM
http://www.lotsofjokes.com/cat_312.htm They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
Re: Slam. by darby pyn	20-Jun-05/2:49 PM
first two stanzas I liked. thought of sex.. then BINGO..it was you saving her from a mosh pit fall down.. nice surprise. I'd drop the last two commentary stanzas...
Re: Slam. by darby pyn	20-Jun-05/2:51 PM
okay.. I really meant I liked the first 3 stanzas.. color me ignorant.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jun-05/7:19 PM
something wicked this way comes...
Re: Treblinka Re-opened by Caducus	20-Jun-05/7:20 PM
why blame God?
Re: Flicking by INTRANSIT	20-Jun-05/7:28 PM
I'm just confused. It may not be your fault that I am ignorant. chicane= a movable barrier used in motor racing ? "thrusting against movable barriers" ?
Re: Rise (incomplete) by Miracle	20-Jun-05/10:57 PM
and maybe the Texas sun can call you west, and the moon from Houston can call you home.
Re: Arson by Roisin	21-Jun-05/2:09 PM
I liked the first two lines of the 1st and 2nd stanza, and the first line in the 3rd stanza. "Bridge soaked in alcohol I lit the match I saw your face as the blaze began I watched in silence as timber blackened." I give my variation on your poem a -6-
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jun-05/3:08 PM
it's lyrical.. I think. 'steal my lone" ? lone=adj. Without accompaniment,Without companionship, Being the only one; sole, Situated by itself. Steal my being the only one. Steal my without companionship Steal my situated by itself.
Re: After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn	22-Jun-05/12:29 AM
a scar can not by definition be invisible. Or it isn't a scar. it's unmarred flesh. What makes a scar a scar is the Marring. all that to wonder out loud; is English your first language?
Re: Sandia Plain by Dovina	22-Jun-05/12:37 AM
are you talking about the Sandia near the Rio Grande? What you have written makes me wonder about the author and not about the poem itself. Does that make it art? I don't know. I'm trying to figure out your motivation without knowing you. This is a lot of NOT thinking about the above words.
Re: Mountain Gorillas by Blue Magpie	22-Jun-05/12:42 AM
you think the gorillas think about our inner struggle as higher primates? you think the gorillas see their imminent extinction and wonder about the cause of it? I disagree with your heart, but I don't dislike your sonnet.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-05/10:51 AM
velvet ropes guiding to the gift shop, poster-prints waiting for the voracious consumer. I had to use the dictionary twice, but that's okay.
Re: Third person. by darby pyn	23-Jun-05/2:17 AM
I mean no offense when I tell you that the first sentence to come into my mind when I read this was, "What in The Hell?" I'm gonna go to bed and read this again in the morning. See what shakes off the tree then.