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grin and stand (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 walking by your side
sweat is soaking on my brow
my hands are sweaty
my tungue is tied
i cant speak at all
i just grin and stand
i stare into firey eyes
and wisper how great you are
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Posted: June 19, 2005 4:38 PM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2005 4:38 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.618551 Overall Rank: 12433 Comments:
spell check.
But what if he can activate spell check only by manual command and can't spell spell check right? I mean, what does he have to check to see if spell check was spelled correct?
you're right.. this guy could be screwed for the foreseeable future....and we will have to simply hope he will start to write his poetry in a Word Document with red underlines.
In addition to spelling, please reconsider "firey eyes." Otherwise a pretty good expression of teen awe.
I would have to disagree with Dovina, this is a bland mediocre expression of teenage infatuation. The use of punctuation, and the correct form of the first person singular would also be a step in the right direction.
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>>tungue<< ----tongue
>>firey<< -----fiery
>>wisper<< ----whisper
>>cant<< ------oh yes of course, the new, cool spelling we all race thru life theez days, from work 2 parkinglot 2 nightjob 2 parkinglot 2 pc 2 parkinglot 2 bar 2 mortician & graveyard, so we cant be bothrd by writng crect nmore.
>>sweat is soaking on my brow<<
You obviously never sweat. What is the sweat soaking? Your brow? Must be an awful sight, those flaps of soaked through, pulpy skin coming loose...she wont find u so great anymoor
Writers who write down without thinking are no writers.