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grin and stand (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

walking by your side sweat is soaking on my brow my hands are sweaty my tungue is tied i cant speak at all i just grin and stand i stare into firey eyes and wisper how great you are

DoubleU 19-Jun-05/5:09 PM
Sigh. Why do I bother?
>>tungue<< ----tongue
>>firey<< -----fiery
>>wisper<< ----whisper
>>cant<< ------oh yes of course, the new, cool spelling we all race thru life theez days, from work 2 parkinglot 2 nightjob 2 parkinglot 2 pc 2 parkinglot 2 bar 2 mortician & graveyard, so we cant be bothrd by writng crect nmore.

>>sweat is soaking on my brow<<
You obviously never sweat. What is the sweat soaking? Your brow? Must be an awful sight, those flaps of soaked through, pulpy skin coming loose...she wont find u so great anymoor

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