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grin and stand
(
Free verse
) by
celticskatermatt1
walking by your side sweat is soaking on my brow my hands are sweaty my tungue is tied i cant speak at all i just grin and stand i stare into firey eyes and wisper how great you are
Dovina
19-Jun-05/6:50 PM
In addition to spelling, please reconsider "firey eyes." Otherwise a pretty good expression of teen awe.
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