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Untitled (Free verse) by davetcool I've been left so empty.
In my greatest time of need.
I can't live without you,
How can I go on?
I love you with
all my heart and
I can't live with
out you by my side
Dried Roses brush gently off your face
Dried Roses were hanging on your wall
Dried Roses are all that's left
Dried Roses burn brightly in the flames
Up the ladder:
grin and stand
Down the ladder:
To Live
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Posted: July 14, 2002 4:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 4:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.615798 Overall Rank: 12439 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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14-Jul-02/5:43 PM
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Quick remidy, bang her best friend (just kidding)but odds are it will happen again, and again until you find someone mature enough to respect you're kind of deeply inspired symbolismb
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