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Free verse № 4542

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Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

I've been left so empty. In my greatest time of need. I can't live without you, How can I go on? I love you with all my heart and I can't live with out you by my side Dried Roses brush gently off your face Dried Roses were hanging on your wall Dried Roses are all that's left Dried Roses burn brightly in the flames

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[7] horus8 14-Jul-02/5:43 PM Reply
Quick remidy, bang her best friend (just kidding)but odds are it will happen again, and again until you find someone mature enough to respect you're kind of deeply inspired symbolismb