| Re: The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina |
22-May-07/10:19 AM |
Bovilexia (bo vil eks' e uh) - n. The uncontrollable urge to lean out the car window and yell "Moo!" every time you pass a cow.
-from Richard Hall's Sniglets: Words that don't appear in the dictionary, but should.
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| Re: The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina |
22-May-07/9:54 AM |
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You over chisel your poems as much as Rockmage under chisels his rocks. I would suggest you pad you quatrains for aesthetics and imagery sake. Maybe make them all 6 lines each. Nothing wrong with indulging in superfluous language.
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| Re: a comment on A twisted Trail in Edenâs Garden by Dovina |
18-May-07/5:18 PM |
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Sorry hun, flower girl position has already been taken but the bride has been instucted to aim for you with the bouquet. Till then remember a rose as radiant as you needs no accompaniment of other flowers.
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| Re: A twisted Trail in Edenâs Garden by Dovina |
18-May-07/10:35 AM |
Very lyrical. Nice to see that from you.
One must remember it took the devil himself to seduce Eve but it only took a woman to seduce Adam.
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| Re: Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins |
18-May-07/9:31 AM |
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The entire cast of Monty Python farts in your general direction.
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| Re: My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta |
18-May-07/9:28 AM |
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I love how you admit to god feelings many would feel uncomfortable speaking about to god. "erase those emotions that cause me to be disappointed in you" for instance. More prayer than poem but a very good prayer.
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| Re: Les Imagistes by Nicholas Jones |
18-Feb-07/8:08 AM |
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I would bet my right arm that no duck that has ever existed aside from maybe Donald, Daffy or Howard the duck has ever contemplated in any way the profundity of walking on water.
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| Re: You by amanda_dcosta |
8-Feb-07/6:06 AM |
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Some of the best half rhyme I've read here.
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| Re: She dreams by amanda_dcosta |
8-Feb-07/5:57 AM |
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One of the best poems I've read here. He's a very lucky man.
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| Re: Flowers by Dovina |
8-Feb-07/5:31 AM |
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-{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@, 10 -{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@,-{-<@,
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
31-Oct-06/7:48 AM |
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Thing is I'm by no means anti-English. I'm anti anti-American English twit. A title of which Ol' Edna fits perfectly into.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
31-Oct-06/7:30 AM |
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You say it like Oliva' Twist, like you 'unger for it."Can I have some mo' Please?"- Bon apitit bitch.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
31-Oct-06/6:24 AM |
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What's the use of having perfect grammar if you're still just a vulgar hag despite it? Tell me that, Gov'na or me-lady or whatever you are.
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| Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove |
31-Oct-06/5:09 AM |
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You seem to be so upset over a little neglection of spelling. Nah, I just got to you that's all. It was so easy too.
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| Re: The Pitâs Bottom by Dovina |
29-Oct-06/6:38 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy |
29-Oct-06/6:23 AM |
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NEWSFLASH: Nobody uses "WRONGLY" at the end of a verb anymore except very old English people. ("WRONGLY spelled" would have been fine.)
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| Re: Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove |
29-Oct-06/6:01 AM |
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Actually it's England that's on the wrong side of the street. We had cars first. Anything to prove your not our 51st state.
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| Re: a comment on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy |
29-Oct-06/5:48 AM |
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...which is the entire point of the poem genius.
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| Re: a comment on Vote Goats by ALChemy |
29-Oct-06/5:46 AM |
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Fair enough but I could have sworn you were one of those anonymous voting types not so long ago.
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| Re: Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
15-Sep-06/7:34 PM |
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