| Re: In Full Stop by vulcan |
5-Oct-02/1:05 AM |
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aww really strange, too vague and strange for me to comprehend, shit its late, i will just give it a 5, in case it might be good and im just tostupid to seeit
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| Re: Can't See by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Oct-02/1:04 AM |
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well how bout i tell you who to kill and you do it then! we would make a great team, and then when you tell the cops it wasnt you, you had someone telling you what to do, you couldnt point me out in a line up! damn this is just too perfect!
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| Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-02/1:02 AM |
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hmm, this seems pretty pointless, why would you write about it, give it a twist, did you kill anyone? or do drugs? make it interesting to the common man!
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| Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom |
5-Oct-02/1:00 AM |
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religion and government suck, they will end up killing us all, i wish they would go away, nah, i wish i could go away, live on an island, bring some friends, it would be good times, and no government and church to fuck things up, yeah right like that would happen, i would probably just get invaded and some gov or church would try to occupy my utopia, fuck them fuck them all i wish they would die, god, shit, this sucks, not the poem, the situation
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| Re: The TRust That Was Unreal by wootness |
5-Oct-02/12:57 AM |
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| Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77 |
5-Oct-02/12:52 AM |
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hmmmmm, well any girl that is worth all that effort... probably isnt. dump that bitch and find a nice homely girl that will treat you the way you should be treated
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| Re: I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-02/12:51 AM |
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did we, or didnt we? that is the question, whether tis noblier in the mind to sit in a wok on an icy hill or to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous misfortune
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| Re: No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni |
5-Oct-02/12:43 AM |
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i used to write like this, then i realized how retarded it is and was was and i got better to be seen without not being and everyone saw how it was with the light of what was and what is and what the fuck am i saying
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| Re: PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr |
5-Oct-02/12:41 AM |
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why dont you die and then i can survey people to see if they care or not! it will be some good empirical data for your ponderance as to whether anyone cares
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| Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8 |
5-Oct-02/12:38 AM |
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an exciting journey through the mind of a mad man, reminds me of brad pitts character in tweleve monkies
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
22-Sep-02/12:59 AM |
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god, all this has gone on to far, (not to plagerize Rodney King) but cant we all just get along, this is just a web site for people to submit poems and get some feedback, is it not? why the cruelty? why does everyone feel the need to so 'witfully' make fun of the author, they try their best, you dont need to fuck with their ego, just because some of you may be more experienced at writting doesnt mean you are any better, we all had to start somewhere. cant you all just relax. and if not, go to some aol chatroom where these type of verbal personal attacks are accepted with open arms...
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| Re: a comment on Fleas by bigbigdog |
19-Sep-02/2:14 PM |
someone is going crazy flaging everything as plagerism, all mine are flagged for some reason
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| Re: Lavendar Gate by <~> |
11-Sep-02/12:36 AM |
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hmm, boring, journeyman? quest? sounds like too many role playing games?
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| Re: terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w |
11-Sep-02/12:33 AM |
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nice poem... i suppose. i like the eminem mention, hes funny, but his last name is mathers
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| Re: Summer Day by Tekara |
11-Sep-02/12:31 AM |
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hmm, too plain for my taste, sure i can picture myself in the scene but do i really want to be there? a cat? bright day? cloudy? sidewalk? id rather be surfing
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