Re: a comment on tumbleweed by crooked_smile	3-Apr-05/12:08 PM
very clever........
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	12-Mar-05/5:15 PM
why thankyou
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	12-Mar-05/5:14 PM
that wouldnt be much to brag about - lia
Re: a comment on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile	12-Mar-05/5:12 PM
of course i read your comment - lia
Re: a comment on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile	10-Mar-05/1:01 PM
thanks - i guess what i meant by "straight answer" is that like, you know, if you believe god is compassionate why is their suffering, if he doesnt know of the suffering then how is he all knowing, if it is because of the devil why does he stop it stuff like that ------- -lia
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	9-Mar-05/6:40 PM
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out -lia
Re: oops by jay_dace	9-Mar-05/4:01 PM
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate! without that it would be a 5 with that change more of a 9 ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7 -lia
Re: My days work by lucky_cmc	9-Mar-05/4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special 2)it was rather bland and run of the mill -lia
Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote	9-Mar-05/3:58 PM
i really like this.......... -lia
Re: a comment on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry	8-Mar-05/12:03 PM
interesting -lia
Re: Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos	8-Mar-05/11:52 AM
this appears to be a bunch of rambling nonsense - 3 - -lia
Re: a comment on The Muses by crooked_smile	7-Mar-05/4:28 PM
but was it really about not being able to write a poem? -lia
Re: The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485	7-Mar-05/3:44 PM
interesting - 7 - -lia
Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait	7-Mar-05/3:41 PM
this i don't feel was all that good - 5 - -lia
Re: What am I doing? by INTRANSIT	7-Mar-05/3:41 PM
this was interesting - and if flowed nicely - 8 - -lia
Re: Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski	6-Mar-05/6:00 PM
i like it - 8 -
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	6-Mar-05/5:59 PM
i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is - 5 -
Re: Of Pride and Climate by MacFrantic	6-Mar-05/5:55 PM
i really like this
Re: His Light by DevilBuni	5-Mar-05/8:49 AM
ah, id say this is just a tab bit cliched, and the rhyming is stale and seems forced, you also spelled souless wrong i believe...the idea you are trying to convey are nice but I think you need to liven it up a bit......- 5 -
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	5-Mar-05/8:47 AM
ooh i love this im not sure if you were trying to convey an "inner" meaning, or if you were just giving an illustrative piece but either way i think its excellent - 10 -