on Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
5 Mar 2005, 8:36 AM
im not a very big fan of rhyming, and this does sound rather forced to me - 5-
on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee
5 Mar 2005, 8:47 AM
ooh i love this
im not sure if you were trying to convey an "inner" meaning, or if you were just giving an illustrative piece but either way i think its excellent - 10 -
im not sure if you were trying to convey an "inner" meaning, or if you were just giving an illustrative piece but either way i think its excellent - 10 -
on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry
5 Mar 2005, 8:32 AM
very interesting, i like the images and the melody of it, but im not quite sure im understanding the full meaning
on Of Pride and Climate by MacFrantic
6 Mar 2005, 5:55 PM
i really like this
on Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski
6 Mar 2005, 6:00 PM
i like it - 8 -
on some deleted poem
6 Mar 2005, 6:03 PM
i love it - 10 - !
on What am I doing? by INTRANSIT
7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this was interesting - and if flowed nicely - 8 -
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on trapoide by Angel_of_fait
7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this i don't feel was all that good
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on The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485
7 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
interesting - 7 -
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on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos
8 Mar 2005, 11:52 AM
this appears to be a bunch of rambling nonsense - 3 -
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on untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote
9 Mar 2005, 3:58 PM
i really like this..........
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on My days work by lucky_cmc
9 Mar 2005, 4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good
a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special
2)it was rather bland and run of the mill
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a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special
2)it was rather bland and run of the mill
-lia