| Re: Trying to say by persephone6358 |
8-Oct-02/12:36 PM |
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Dear gods. I cannot imagine why Hades would ever want to steal you away. I think I'll go warn him.
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| Re: one is leaving as i enter by Limness |
8-Oct-02/12:12 PM |
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Because you're attracted to them. Admit it. You like it.
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| Re: Hearts End by grrund |
3-Oct-02/11:04 AM |
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All right, I can see that you needed a rhyme for 'road', but 'toad' really is pushing it a bit, don't you think?
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| Re: When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes |
3-Oct-02/10:57 AM |
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| Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner |
3-Oct-02/10:56 AM |
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Not sure I like it that, but the first stanza's quite good.
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| Re: Funny Thought by phbiscuit |
3-Oct-02/10:52 AM |
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This is 1)wonderful, 2)quite a realistic view of what goes through a dying person's mind. Bravo.
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| Re: The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana |
3-Oct-02/10:50 AM |
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I don't want to sound nasty, but I'm rooting for the stalker, myself.
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| Re: #16 by mikejedw |
3-Oct-02/10:45 AM |
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This question has been asked for centuires, and formulated much better than you do.
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
3-Oct-02/10:41 AM |
You could be something other than gloomy. Nights like that are beautiful.
Oh, wait, this is suburbia. All right, all you could be is gloomy. You're quite right.
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| Re: one word by Blade |
3-Oct-02/10:39 AM |
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Yup. That's only one word all right.
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| Re: Confused by planetdicko |
3-Oct-02/10:37 AM |
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Too many exclamations marks.
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| Re: All because of you by Artificial_Sweetner |
25-Sep-02/9:54 PM |
Why does your pain amuse us so much? Because it's so paltry, boring, cliched, misspelt and amusing. That's all,
Stacey dear, that's all.
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| Re: a comment on Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8 |
25-Sep-02/9:50 PM |
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And didst thou define it for him?
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| Re: Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi |
25-Sep-02/9:21 PM |
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I have to agree that it drifts a little before the rolling off of the names, which is a stunning moment. What can I say, your long post talking about your village actually moved me more than most of the poem did. 'For, how many, which' was wonderful. And Poetandknowit, I must ask if you have read this poem in the original language, and if so if you understand that original language, before you go saying that's it's no good in that language.
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| Re: Fall by morffrom |
25-Sep-02/9:04 PM |
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'Mists and frosts rhyme' is damn good. The rest leaves to be desired.
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| Re: a comment on Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8 |
25-Sep-02/9:00 PM |
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Dare one ask what you replied?
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| Re: Best Friends by Chels85 |
25-Sep-02/7:31 PM |
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Too many exclamation marks, among other things. Far too many. Especially since they're useless.
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| Re: Taffy by knickytoy |
25-Sep-02/7:29 PM |
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Is candy all you ever talk about?
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| Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart |
25-Sep-02/7:20 PM |
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I wouldn't mind the single line so much if you spelt well. Please tell me that 'houlisanating' wasn't just a typo, but supposed to mean something.
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| Re: glory bar realities by royalflesh |
25-Sep-02/7:17 PM |
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The Jesus parts make it wonderful. Not so sure about the rest.
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