Re: a comment on This is Bad by newagepoet2000 |
20-Nov-04/7:31 PM |
lol yea... and that makes it so good
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Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick |
20-Nov-04/1:49 AM |
i think you have too many dots... it interferes with the other dots, don't u think? lol
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Re: Gone Away by Christof |
20-Nov-04/12:29 AM |
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Re: Fastened to my belt by irishfolksuicide |
20-Nov-04/12:27 AM |
need more writers like you.
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Re: a comment on advice to innovators by (m)ee cummings by irishfolksuicide |
20-Nov-04/12:24 AM |
lol post it, shuushin, and i'll vote for you instead of irishfolksuicide!
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Re: the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide |
20-Nov-04/12:23 AM |
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Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide |
20-Nov-04/12:21 AM |
like the richness of ur poems..
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Re: firelight lost by irishfolksuicide |
20-Nov-04/12:19 AM |
mamamia... lol that was good!
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Re: "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus |
20-Nov-04/12:18 AM |
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Re: The Khat by Bachus |
20-Nov-04/12:16 AM |
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Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus |
20-Nov-04/12:13 AM |
interesting poem... hope your other poems are better! :)
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Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000 |
19-Nov-04/9:12 PM |
i think the point of the last line was to rhyme? dunno. even that,... lol funny
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Re: puff by Torok |
19-Nov-04/8:53 PM |
this poem,
nice nice nice.
i like fish, btw.
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Re: A song by fatmansinging |
19-Nov-04/8:43 PM |
that, my friend, is a fat man singing
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Re: Breakfast by flouredweevle |
19-Nov-04/7:46 PM |
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
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Re: This is Bad by newagepoet2000 |
19-Nov-04/7:41 PM |
lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!
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Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
19-Nov-04/7:37 PM |
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Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Nov-04/7:36 PM |
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Re: Caducus (destined to fall) by Caducus |
19-Nov-04/7:35 PM |
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Re: The Big NO by alexander |
19-Nov-04/7:31 PM |
it was... O.K.. i like your other poem, "sunshine" better..
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