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puff (Limerick) by Torok
Puffy fish Clean knife Carry on Slice, Slice, Slice The fishes partner Swims in clear blue water The fish a dreamer and eaten sooner

Up the ladder: stumbling into love
Down the ladder: Feel Like A Failure

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6111
Posted: October 12, 2004 2:08 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2004 2:08 PM PDT
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[n/a] New Life Drug @ 69.107.3.231 | 12-Oct-04/10:01 PM | Reply
the fishes partner? did you mean the fish's or fishes' im confused. are there two fish? damn. I hate fish. today my friend ate a tuna sandwich.
[n/a] Rollsoftoiletpaper @ 205.188.117.13 | 13-Oct-04/7:33 PM | Reply
Hah, sucks to be a fish.
[10] 7!3 @ 219.93.174.101 | 19-Nov-04/8:53 PM | Reply
this poem,
nice nice nice.

i like fish, btw.
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