Re: Dreams of Neverland: Journey to Neverland by TLRufener |
15-Dec-04/3:18 PM |
This is ok.
So you like Peter Pan. That's cool because not alot of people I know like him. So that's great.
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Re: I love by Leigha Browning |
14-Jan-05/8:19 PM |
I really think love is great even if I don't know the real reason for it. You make it sound a lot more better then it already is.
I have had a lot of bad things happen when I was with somone and when I read this poem it helped me think about all the good things that happened. I looked on the bright side for once.
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14-Jan-05/8:32 PM |
I like this poem because what it talks about is how I feel about someone. To tell you the truth I feel that way about alot of people not just one. I also like it because I love the way you wrote it. Your a cool writer. I rate you a 8.
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Re: Recognition by nentwined |
14-Jan-05/9:31 PM |
I liked this poem so much I made it one of my favorites.
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Re: A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry |
16-Jan-05/5:46 PM |
Do you really think Hollywood is that fake?
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Re: Step Up by Blindpoetry |
19-Feb-05/3:22 PM |
What are you trying to say? You most tell me. Email me and don't say any bad words in the email. It's my school email address and they don't let us say anything bad. That fucken sucks but i'm use to it.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Feb-05/3:40 PM |
I liked the way you compared every thing. Examples: the citys a jungle/her streets burn you just like a fire
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Re: Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04 |
24-Feb-05/6:22 PM |
I liked it. I will say the truth and say it is not the best but it's good. Keep writing and you will get better at it.
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Re: Violent Storm by Fearlesfan_04 |
24-Feb-05/6:31 PM |
What is the theme of the poem?
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Re: Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
3-Mar-05/10:55 PM |
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Re: Simple by wilco |
5-Mar-05/10:09 AM |
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Re: exercise by JoyLuck |
7-Mar-05/7:01 PM |
Cool. I like the way you make everything sound so simple. I like that kind of stuff in poems. I rate this poem and poet a 10.
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Re: Snow Sucks by JoyLuck |
7-Mar-05/7:06 PM |
Snow does suck. That sucks and good poem. I rate it a 8.
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Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
7-Mar-05/7:11 PM |
What is the point to this poem?
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Re: wishes by the_poetess |
7-Mar-05/7:17 PM |
I know what you mean. I want something crazy to happen. That's way when I get the chance I go eggbomb my school. That is so much fucken fun and it's even better when my friends come with me. We fuck my school up.
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Re: Get Away by Miggy |
7-Mar-05/7:39 PM |
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Re: Crazy by that_funny_girl |
7-Mar-05/7:43 PM |
I really don't understand all of it but the parts I do understand make the poem sound good.
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Re: Disfigure by DevilBuni |
7-Mar-05/7:59 PM |
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Re: What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
7-Mar-05/8:12 PM |
Dude this was great. I don't think you read me this one but I know what you mean.
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Re: Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
7-Mar-05/8:17 PM |
For some reason when one person writes the first time the second always follows with I agree with who ever was first. That's stuipd but funny. Who were you talking about in the poem?
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