Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL? |
2-Sep-04/9:44 PM |
i really like this peice... it puts me in a certain state of mind
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Re: to my best friend david by wowzers718 |
8-Sep-04/12:15 AM |
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Re: Driftwood by GekoHawaii |
8-Sep-04/12:21 AM |
nice flow and good rhymes and good story
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Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL? |
17-Sep-04/5:45 PM |
ya its kinda violent but.........i was real pissed off when i wrote it so what can i say?
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Re: The Mirror by berdabear |
18-Sep-04/11:14 AM |
ouch thats harsh,but u can feel the hate and thats great..........but i hope its not true it would be a waste of talent
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Sep-04/11:17 AM |
fuckin great...i liked it all,rhymes rythym flow its great
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Sep-04/11:19 AM |
so far im lovin your work...keep going... ill keep reading
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Re: Drunk and Fucked Up by wilco |
18-Sep-04/11:26 AM |
i think it was great could be a great song
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regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Sep-04/10:10 PM |
I WOULD LIKE TO THANK U FOR YOUR COMMENT,BUT I WOULD LIKE U TO READ MY UNTITLED AND FALLING ASLEEP,THANX AGAIN
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Re: NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali |
19-Sep-04/10:15 PM |
I REALLY ENJOID READING THIS PEICE ITS VERY DARK MYSTERIOUS
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Re: Winters Death by Brandy_n_Cali |
19-Sep-04/10:17 PM |
I LIKE THE FLOW BUT I DONT NO WHAT U MEAN?
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Re: Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali |
19-Sep-04/10:21 PM |
I REALLY LIKES THIS 1 EVERYTHING ABOUT IT IS HEARTFELT AND SOULFILLED
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Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya |
5-Jan-05/9:28 PM |
hey miss dictionary not to bad.....not to bad....o and sorry 4 all the spelling mistakes
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Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya |
5-Jan-05/9:28 PM |
hey miss dictionary not to bad.....not to bad....o and sorry 4 all the spelling mistakes
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Re: Sadness by that_funny_girl |
16-Aug-05/12:31 AM |
fukin loved it very detaild
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Re: Crazy by that_funny_girl |
16-Aug-05/12:35 AM |
sounds to me like u have been betrayed from what ive read in ur poems
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Re: Car Ride by that_funny_girl |
16-Aug-05/12:38 AM |
i like the poem itself....but i dont understand the ending
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Re: Because Life is a Game by that_funny_girl |
16-Aug-05/12:41 AM |
i like this one....very truthful
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Re: A Prayer by that_funny_girl |
16-Aug-05/12:43 AM |
who hasnt asked god what are they here for
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Re: a killer world by AM I EVIL? |
17-Aug-05/4:29 PM |
i think its good u have to try hard to forget me........o and thanx for the lesson
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