Poemranker [Poem: Winters Death] [by Brandy_n_Cali] Sat Apr 27 03:14:47 PDT 2024

Winters Death (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali

Sunlight bursts through the grey shadowed sky. Winters heart sank in the deep dark to die. Spirits spun with their eyes tightly shut. Stunned with curiousity of what Winter's Death awaits

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Up the ladder: The Pipe Scraping Tool

Down the ladder: The break-up

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.625
Weighted score: 5.43703
Overall Rank: 3006

Posted: August 23, 2004 2:23 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2004 2:23 AM PDT
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Comments:

[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 23-Aug-04/7:13 AM | Reply

I like the way you have indented "Spirits". So queer, but yet so gay.

Do you have a big pair of bristols or a tiny pair of thr'p'nnies?

[3] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 7-Sep-04/8:31 PM | Reply

odd. I think better than a lot of your stuff simply through obfuscation and length.

[6] AM I EVIL? @ 24.71.61.94 | 19-Sep-04/10:17 PM | Reply

I LIKE THE FLOW BUT I DONT NO WHAT U MEAN?

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