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Free verse № 110878

Winters Death

by Brandy_n_Cali

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

Sunlight bursts through the grey shadowed sky. Winters heart sank in the deep dark to die. Spirits spun with their eyes tightly shut. Stunned with curiousity of what Winter's Death awaits

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[10] Stephen Robins 23-Aug-04/7:13 AM Reply
I like the way you have indented "Spirits". So queer, but yet so gay.

Do you have a big pair of bristols or a tiny pair of thr'p'nnies?
[3] nentwined 7-Sep-04/8:31 PM Reply
odd. I think better than a lot of your stuff simply through obfuscation and length.
[6] AM I EVIL? 19-Sep-04/10:17 PM Reply
I LIKE THE FLOW BUT I DONT NO WHAT U MEAN?