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Winters Death (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali Sunlight bursts through the grey shadowed sky. Winters
heart sank in the deep dark to die.
Spirits spun with their eyes tightly shut. Stunned with
curiousity of what Winter's Death awaits
Up the ladder:
The Pedestal And Promised Land
Down the ladder:
The Editor
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Posted: August 23, 2004 2:23 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2004 2:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.43703 Overall Rank: 3016 Comments:
odd. I think better than a lot of your stuff simply through obfuscation and length.
I LIKE THE FLOW BUT I DONT NO WHAT U MEAN?
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Do you have a big pair of bristols or a tiny pair of thr'p'nnies?