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Winters Death (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali

Sunlight bursts through the grey shadowed sky. Winters heart sank in the deep dark to die. Spirits spun with their eyes tightly shut. Stunned with curiousity of what Winter's Death awaits

nentwined 7-Sep-04/8:31 PM
odd. I think better than a lot of your stuff simply through obfuscation and length.




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