replying on my sweet by darylchew
6 Oct 2008, 4:49 PM
ha ha
on Rails to Trails by Dovina
6 Oct 2008, 3:45 PM
lovely. anyway, do you remember me, dovina?
replying on Close your eyes but keep your mind wide open by darylchew
28 May 2007, 9:41 AM
the poem is about death and loss and how a person copes
replying on Close your eyes but keep your mind wide open by darylchew
28 May 2007, 7:58 AM
alright! got that line off bridge to terabithia, sort of a reply to the movie.
replying on Close your eyes but keep your mind wide open by darylchew
28 May 2007, 7:28 AM
ha, when was poetry ever necessary?
on The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu
28 May 2007, 7:15 AM
some E. E. Cummings in this one ha
on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
28 May 2007, 7:09 AM
nice, lots of emotion in this one. i've always liked villanelles.
replying on Staying Alive by darylchew
21 Apr 2005, 12:59 AM
it's about aids.
replying on the Dreamer by darylchew
17 Apr 2005, 7:09 AM
well, I'm sorry if you find this poem so unoriginal but it just came in a rush of thoughts. and I don't exactly listen to the beatles no, I'm fifteen years old. thanks for taking the trouble to comment anyway : D
replying on Cutting The Ropes by darylchew
22 Oct 2004, 7:30 PM
"the nurse who cares and loves.
yet with a swift cut."
"The rock smiles, showing it's jagged teeth."
it's a love = letting go thing.
yet with a swift cut."
"The rock smiles, showing it's jagged teeth."
it's a love = letting go thing.
on The way I know it's love by baby_d
2 Oct 2004, 10:19 PM
very very true.
on Mystery Lady by longships
28 Sep 2004, 10:27 AM
interesting. who or what is mystery lady.
on Daddy by LintyWeenis
13 Sep 2004, 6:24 AM
this world is cold.
on By the way... by sk8boardandpoems
5 Sep 2004, 8:45 AM
this is..stupid.
on The Awakening by Kitch
5 Sep 2004, 8:40 AM
i understand.
on Car Crashes by poemwanker
5 Sep 2004, 8:28 AM
vulgarities. are not tolerated.
on True Friendship; No boundaries with You and Me by meghan
5 Sep 2004, 6:57 AM
is bestest even a word. spelling mistakes.