Re: Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn	28-Aug-04/1:57 AM
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection. but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night To remind me of you"
Re: Broken by psychedelic	28-Aug-04/2:00 AM
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-04/2:02 AM
hahaha this is really funny. dirty.
Re: Your Great by scitz	28-Aug-04/2:04 AM
...reminds me of her.
Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry	28-Aug-04/2:05 AM
true.
Re: this one is for Jon by tstormer	28-Aug-04/2:05 AM
weird. not good.
Re: Masculine by temptalia	28-Aug-04/2:07 AM
nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.
Re: hurt by yOum|n	28-Aug-04/2:09 AM
sometimes i feel this way too. good.
Re: Haiku by Cha no Onna	28-Aug-04/2:17 AM
nice.
Re: Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Aug-04/11:28 AM
its funny.
Re: along the alley by BigB	30-Aug-04/7:02 AM
nice. about how one almost falls down to the depths of no return, but turning back just in time. inspirational. good use of light-imagery.
Re: 32 Truths and 1 Lie by wilco	30-Aug-04/7:59 AM
really good.
Re: Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	30-Aug-04/10:13 AM
...what is 'they did it' supposed to mean. vague.