on 32 Truths and 1 Lie by wilco
30 Aug 2004, 7:59 AM
really good.
on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Aug 2004, 11:28 AM
its funny.
on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina
30 Aug 2004, 10:13 AM
...what is 'they did it' supposed to mean. vague.
on Just A Dream by Blindpoetry
28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM
true.
on along the alley by BigB
30 Aug 2004, 7:02 AM
nice. about how one almost falls down to the depths of no return, but turning back just in time. inspirational. good use of light-imagery.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2004, 2:02 AM
hahaha this is really funny. dirty.
on Your Great by scitz
28 Aug 2004, 2:04 AM
...reminds me of her.
on this one is for Jon by tstormer
28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM
weird. not good.
on Haiku by Cha no Onna
28 Aug 2004, 2:17 AM
nice.
on Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn
28 Aug 2004, 1:57 AM
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"
on Broken by psychedelic
28 Aug 2004, 2:00 AM
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.