Re: I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17	8-Sep-04/2:21 PM
Hmm. We've all felt like that at one point or another.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Sep-04/2:31 PM
Ah, I couldn't help it. It actually made me smirk a little.
Re: Worlds Worst Poem by Brittanyy	8-Sep-04/2:35 PM
Um. Well the words "letting go issues" comes to mind, but who am I to judge. It's a 5 for me, Bob.
Re: Mourning Sickness by Pervy Elf	8-Sep-04/2:48 PM
Yea.
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	8-Sep-04/2:52 PM
This poem is one of the longer ones I've read. But, as long as it was for me, I kept reading. That's good. Typos I could have done without, but otherwise, lovely.
Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP	8-Sep-04/3:33 PM
I don't know. I couldn't get myself to finish the whole thing.
Re: Forever Lasting by ChefKSP	8-Sep-04/3:54 PM
I Will Always Feel Complete While Your In My Life. Yep.
Re: Dare by LintyWeenis	8-Sep-04/6:09 PM
It's open to interpretation. And who says it's a she?
Re: Dare by LintyWeenis	11-Sep-04/3:24 PM
Well, I say it's open to interpretation because if someone reads it and thinks that this person is screaming out of excitement, well then that's what they get. I personally wrote it with that person screaming in fear because I'm about to go hallin' ass down a busy freeway. I can see where I could use some clarity but grammar?
Re: A Choice by Dovina	11-Sep-04/3:28 PM
"They make me glad". I don't know much about poetry, I mean I read and write the stuff and maybe it's just my simple understanding, but the line "They make me glad." kind of dropped me. I liked the poem though.
Re: Deep Sleep by Enchantres	11-Sep-04/3:29 PM
Oooh, very interesting. Nice work.
Re: Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik	11-Sep-04/3:35 PM
Well, although I'm kind of stepping in out of nowhere, I don't think punctuation is for the artless, but it shouldn't be a defining trait in a good writer either. If someone has enough passion that he/she starts writing and doesn't put a period or comma where it should be, then oh well. The Literary Hand of God won't squash us just for that. Good poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/3:38 PM
I disagree with the concensus here. I actually like this. It's a 6 for me.
Re: Funny Little World by LintyWeenis	11-Sep-04/3:42 PM
Hahaha, well burn my buscuits. This poem actually won something. I honestly didn't like this poem too much and am very suprised that it's doing as well as it is. But anyways, if my crappy poem can win something, then just think of the stuff you real writers can win.
Re: Im Scared by crystal4	11-Sep-04/3:54 PM
I like how you took a serious topic and kind of made it into this elementary rhyming thing (and I'm not one to talk). It'll be a 5 for me.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/4:05 PM
Before anyone starts recommending Teen hotline numbers, I'd like to say for the record that this poem is NOT about me.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/4:10 PM
This might be the stupidity talking, but this seemed like one word gathering. I could see the words, but nothing was registering. But! Since I'm sure that it's my fault I don't understand it, I'll put a 6 in, because surely it must mean something.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/4:15 PM
"A rebel just because". I liked that alot. Good poem, last line was eh, but overall, I liked it much.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/4:19 PM
Very good poem. I've always said that I wasn't a big fan of lengthy poems, or poems that appeared to be long, because they bore me. But this made me keep reading. Instant 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-04/4:24 PM
This actually brought a picture to mind. 8.