| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Worlds Worst Poem (Free verse) by Brittanyy She left you for some other guy
You didnt cry, you knew she'd
come back, she always does.
Why do you believe her lies?
Why do you let her hurt you?
When you know I never would.
You know how much I love you,
But youre stuck on her for good.
You treated her like a princess and
she kicked you to the dirt. Now she's
getting jealous cuz Im sleeping in
your shirt.
But she's got her new man now,
What does she want with mine?
if you want to leave me for her
whatever, fine.
Just know that I love you more than
she ever will, Im your baby girl shes
just mad cuz she wants you still.
Up the ladder:
Friend Ship
Down the ladder:
forgetfulness
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.125
Posted: June 18, 2004 11:38 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2004 11:38 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0336175 Overall Rank: 7232 Comments:
Um. Well the words "letting go issues" comes to mind, but who am I to judge. It's a 5 for me, Bob.
220 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
"Now she's
getting jealous cuz Im sleeping in
your shirt."
There is something universally appealing about a woman in a man's shirt.
fourth stanza rocks - I think it should be the last one (kill the last stanza).