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Worlds Worst Poem (Free verse) by Brittanyy

She left you for some other guy You didnt cry, you knew she'd come back, she always does. Why do you believe her lies? Why do you let her hurt you? When you know I never would. You know how much I love you, But youre stuck on her for good. You treated her like a princess and she kicked you to the dirt. Now she's getting jealous cuz Im sleeping in your shirt. But she's got her new man now, What does she want with mine? if you want to leave me for her whatever, fine. Just know that I love you more than she ever will, Im your baby girl shes just mad cuz she wants you still.

Shuushin 21-Jun-04/6:24 PM
definitely not the world's worst line B:
"Now she's
getting jealous cuz Im sleeping in
your shirt."

There is something universally appealing about a woman in a man's shirt.

fourth stanza rocks - I think it should be the last one (kill the last stanza).




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