Re: a way to pass time by unknown^user	7-May-05/6:40 AM
He says its good because you've written about him, his world, no longer listening, indefinite, but still real. Hey, this really is good. I've raised my vote.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-May-05/6:43 AM
Scratch the first 4 lines and put a comma after "ago"
Re: Fate by Fayt	7-May-05/6:47 AM
If this is true, you can do anything you want because it is not you making the choice, and nobody is responsible.
Re: Go now if you want it. by Fayt	7-May-05/6:55 AM
"Faith in the face of light" is the basis of all such hocus-pocus. I hope you mean this as satire.
Re: Strings by Fayt	7-May-05/1:31 PM
Please stop recycling old poems under a new username.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-May-05/11:14 AM
Putting a poet in charge of an open mic reading is the most irresponsible act ever conceived. These events should be controlled rigorously by the government.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-May-05/11:24 AM
The best line is "the night seethed with truth and lies"
Re: Finding Gin and Santa by richa	10-May-05/11:47 AM
Funny, mocking the séance, but not to some.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	10-May-05/12:06 PM
Either everyone is misinterpreting this or I am. We have here, as I see it, a political statement in favor of truck drivers with some poetry added, and pretty good poetry to boot. I think you could lose the last two lines.
Re: The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone	10-May-05/12:59 PM
Overwritten for what it says. Why introduce the King James English? The last line is good.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-May-05/1:08 PM
"mother naked" It's understated, as a political statment should be. You have not abused the system because you get four poems for being new. From here on out, you can only post once in 48 hours.
Re: Lake Michigan by jessicazee	10-May-05/1:16 PM
I don't see how the weatherman forces you to trust. It's all about probabilities. Also, Doppler is a short-time-range tool and does little to predict "rain all week." "gladdened cancer tales" is good.
Re: Anniversary by Hallmark	10-May-05/1:24 PM
This is very funny. It may not sell many cards, but it's good.
Re: May Flowers by oneglove	10-May-05/1:37 PM
Is it about some May flowers visible in the neon lights at night, and worth the drive?
Re: My Life by sleeping monk	10-May-05/5:33 PM
I don't think of my life in the comfortable times between being awake.
Re: Covering the white house by INTRANSIT	12-May-05/11:45 AM
Somehow the title and the last line are alien to to the rest. Otherwise funny.
Re: On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee	12-May-05/12:03 PM
Is an alwife a fish that spawns on the beach of Lake Michigan? The last line needs some help.
Re: The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos	12-May-05/12:10 PM
It tackles too many topics in the second half to be strong in any of them. Would do better to stick with the "I can influence the future" theme.
Re: sixth and highland by unknown^user	12-May-05/12:14 PM
I don't get it.
Re: Lifted by wilco	12-May-05/7:26 PM
The hidden "she" in the last verse gives it an undeveloped twist.