poemranker ::sixth and highland by unknown^user

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Haiku № 124651

sixth and highland

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 12 May 2005 · 2 comments

I watch the birds from my window fly to buildings Only one falls behind never more I watch the people time losing its name staring at hand signs

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mean – weighted 4.76 rank 11450 views 136 View voting details →

1 vote so far. Yours would make 2.1 vote so far

2 comments

[n/a] Dovina 12-May-05/12:14 PM Reply
I don't get it.
[n/a] deleted user 13-May-05/6:00 AM Reply
A haiku goes 5-7-5 and is an observation of nature, a theme you altogether loose in the last stanza. No problem with me, but call it a free haiku then, or something like that.