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sixth and highland (Haiku) by unknown^user

I watch the birds from my window fly to buildings Only one falls behind never more I watch the people time losing its name staring at hand signs

DoubleU 13-May-05/6:00 AM
A haiku goes 5-7-5 and is an observation of nature, a theme you altogether loose in the last stanza. No problem with me, but call it a free haiku then, or something like that.




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