Re: Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer	29-Aug-04/9:39 AM
Ah, to seduce him as a female Mephistopheles devil, kind but candid, unlike the women who have nothing of value to say.
Re: Haunted by Bachus	29-Aug-04/9:45 AM
"Like a book read too much" That's the way these memories are. Why can't we just let them lie?
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-04/9:49 AM
Gosh I didn't know it heaved. Maybe I'll try a minimizing bra. Sorry.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-04/9:37 AM
"all things" seems like it should be "some things" or "impenetrable things." Otherwise great.
Re: He by BigB	30-Aug-04/9:47 AM
Too many possible interpretations for my taste. I'm sure you know what you mean, and if I did, I would probably like this poem better.
Re: Out goes the baby with the garbage by INTRANSIT	30-Aug-04/9:52 AM
What a shock that must have been! No wonder I don't remember it. What an unruly eviction!
Re: along the alley by BigB	30-Aug-04/9:54 AM
The only thing I'd change is punctuation in the first verse to match the others.
Re: The Room by darylchew	30-Aug-04/9:59 AM
Except for the line, "like my biography," this is much less subtle than "abortion." But I didn't get "abortion" at first. Maybe somewhere between is the balance.
Re: ?{……..}? by Prince of Void	31-Aug-04/12:36 PM
I should rename myself Dawn - maybe after the election. "Returning as a star-born child" Hmmmm. Don't know what to make of it. Mysterious.
Re: the stone by BigB	31-Aug-04/12:42 PM
Why the little finger, and not the "ring" or "wedding" finger?
Re: A Usual Days Perspective by TAMARAG67	31-Aug-04/8:19 PM
All poems are useless drivel. The human race is useless drivel. Hey, two peas in a pod. Neither on better than the other. I feel better already.
Re: Love Letter by wilco	2-Sep-04/12:04 PM
She's young and don’t know nothing ‘bout life. A good He-done-her-wrong-song. But is crying bold? It seems more an escape from bold. The last verse - a nice switch.
Re: A Toast to Us! by singinkygal	3-Sep-04/11:15 AM
A perfect expression of passion.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-04/11:17 AM
Out of your league is she? Keep trying will you? So nice of her to leave a small part. A sad comedy how we keep at these passions, not made for solitude. Good.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-04/12:13 PM
A tombstone inscription you've prepared in advance? Like WB Yeats, “Cast a cold eye / On life / On death / Horseman, pass by!” The “horseman” probably refers to the aristocracy of his time.
Re: Down Drown by LintyWeenis	4-Sep-04/12:17 PM
A good thought in need of control. Get a grip on that yarn, tighten it up.
Re: a night of solitude by Faulk	4-Sep-04/12:23 PM
Quite nice. I'd leave out "heavenly" on line 3, and "lost" in line 5. Line 6: "As the breeze stirs . . . Omit "The totality of" A beautiful scene.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-04/12:26 PM
Calm down please. Let's pour some wine.
Re: Cast of Millions by MacFrantic	4-Sep-04/12:27 PM
Very amusing.
Re: A Soldier by dougsoderstrom	4-Sep-04/4:54 PM
And where would we be without them? A poignant reminder.