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A Soldier (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom
A soldier is not a man of God nor even a human being, Rather he is an instrument of war............. a gear, Nothing more than a very small cog in a very large killing machine, An insignificant fleck in the overall fabric of death, A negligible notch on the handle of an enemy’s gun, A mere afterthought for those who would pose war, An unkempt grunt, A lonely gutted, blood-spattered corpse lying on the ground, Something like the crush of a dead dog on a lonely country road, Unless, of course, that soldier just happened to be, My son, your dad, your brother, or our best friend, Someone whose name might well have been Abdul, Mohammed, Usama, Ishmael, Hassan, Yuusuf, Ibrahim, Jabbar, Mukhtar, Or perhaps even Mike, John, or Bill!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7120
Posted: September 4, 2004 3:38 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2004 3:38 PM PDT
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[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 4-Sep-04/4:54 PM | Reply
And where would we be without them? A poignant reminder.
[n/a] dougsoderstrom @ 207.80.112.1 > Dovina | 5-Sep-04/12:26 PM | Reply
PERHAPS AT PEACE! AND WITH MANY IRAQIAN AND AMERICAN MOTHERS ECSTATIC IF THEY NO LONGER HAD TO WORRY ABOUT "THEIR BOYS" KILLING EACH OTHER FOR THOSE OLD GRAY-HAIRED MEN IN POWER WHO HAVE NOT THE COURAGE TO DO THE FIGHTING THEMSELVES!
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.144.11.141 > dougsoderstrom | 5-Sep-04/10:49 PM | Reply
Hey, how long did you have to ponder this matter in the FACULTY DINING ROOM before reaching this stage of enlightenment? PS-"Iraqians" is fucking hilarious.
[n/a] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.71 | 4-Sep-04/8:17 PM | Reply
good use of words, however, i respect soldiers more than you give them credit for
no vote
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.23.37.85 | 5-Sep-04/3:38 AM | Reply
"A mere afterthought for those who would pose war,"
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.23.37.85 > zodiac | 5-Sep-04/3:48 AM | Reply
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