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Free verse № 111506

A Toast to Us!

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

You offered me the vile the liquid that consumes you At first I refused, I pushed it away but, then I tasted it on your lips that devil's nectar so sweet and sinful only a taste I thought then a passionate gulp I drank I crave more more of you before I could only breathe you watch you with her for her your cup is running low but for me it overflows Pour sweet words into me let them flow like milk and honey spill into me your kisses your passion your eroticism your poison fill me feel me Let us toast and drink again

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3-Sep-04/8:34 AM Reply
Passionately stupid. Terrifyingly lewd. Breathtakingly beautiful. -10-
[10] Dovina 3-Sep-04/11:15 AM Reply
A perfect expression of passion.