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A Toast to Us! (Free verse) by singinkygal
You offered me the vile the liquid that consumes you At first I refused, I pushed it away but, then I tasted it on your lips that devil's nectar so sweet and sinful only a taste I thought then a passionate gulp I drank I crave more more of you before I could only breathe you watch you with her for her your cup is running low but for me it overflows Pour sweet words into me let them flow like milk and honey spill into me your kisses your passion your eroticism your poison fill me feel me Let us toast and drink again

Up the ladder: Reaper's Chain
Down the ladder: Widow

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3360
Posted: September 2, 2004 11:14 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 11:14 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.154.163.133 | 3-Sep-04/8:34 AM | Reply
Passionately stupid. Terrifyingly lewd. Breathtakingly beautiful. -10-
[10] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 3-Sep-04/11:15 AM | Reply
A perfect expression of passion.
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