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A Toast to Us! (Free verse) by singinkygal
You offered me the vile
the liquid that consumes you
At first I refused, I pushed it away
but, then I tasted it on your lips
that devil's nectar so sweet and sinful
only a taste I thought then a passionate gulp
I drank
I crave more
more of you
before I could only breathe you
watch you with her
for her your cup is running low
but for me it overflows
Pour sweet words into me
let them flow like milk and honey
spill into me your kisses your passion your eroticism your poison
fill me feel me
Let us toast and drink again
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3368
Posted: September 2, 2004 11:14 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 11:14 PM PDT
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