Free verse № 153609
Sylvania Wilderness
I'm always paddling in front of you
in the lake, in the canoe,
I dig, cut the water,
you steer us in J-flits, your oar
angles us to the first spit
before our site through the branches.
There won't be any bears, you said,
but I heard him first, that black
cub running races along the shore.
You did the right thing,
acting bigger than yourself and loud,
and all night in the tent
I kept holding you tighter
in case the mother bear found our scent,
your Old Spice, my store-brand Pantene.
6 comments
no, well, shoot. The old spice itself is cliche but it steers me away from boyfriend/girlfriend and into father/daughter, so.... Anyway, it's ace. if you revise it any, please post. I'd like to add it to my faves.
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