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Sylvania Wilderness (Free verse) by jessicazee
I'm always paddling in front of you
in the lake, in the canoe,
I dig, cut the water,
you steer us in J-flits, your oar
angles us to the first spit
before our site through the branches.
There won't be any bears, you said,
but I heard him first, that black
cub running races along the shore.
You did the right thing,
acting bigger than yourself and loud,
and all night in the tent
I kept holding you tighter
in case the mother bear found our scent,
your Old Spice, my store-brand Pantene.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3358
Posted: August 23, 2007 2:01 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2007 2:01 AM PDT
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