Re: a comment on Tonight’s Halloween by TLRufener	12-Oct-05/3:23 PM
Never assume about those whom you know not.
Re: a comment on If I Were a Bird by TLRufener	21-Sep-05/2:54 PM
Thanks, I love you, too.
Re: a comment on Castle in the Clouds by TLRufener	19-Sep-05/8:32 AM
Looking at shapes in the clouds is most commonly thought of as a childs' past-time. I switched to rhyme at the half-way mark because I wanted to show the adult reverting to a child. The ending is the child reverting back to the adult, realizing that there are things that must be done before a vacation is due.
Re: a comment on Éire by TLRufener	14-Sep-05/2:59 PM
Thank you.
Re: a comment on I Love You (song) by TLRufener	9-Sep-05/11:39 AM
I wrote this song 5 years, and all I wanted was some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. But I now see that you are unable to think that much. Sorry for making your small mind hurt.
Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener	8-Sep-05/2:34 PM
It would be a lot more helpful if you just repost the comment. Thanks.
Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener	7-Sep-05/8:02 PM
I changed what I felt should be changed. wing ---> wings were ---> are
Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener	6-Sep-05/6:48 AM
I have never heard that song before in my life. Wow.
Re: a comment on Because to Live I Must by TLRufener	5-Jul-05/2:49 PM
The Witch is hiding from her family. She is a closet Witch. The reference to the curtain is her revealing her true beliefs to her family and friends.
Re: a comment on Mother Earth by TLRufener	5-Jul-05/9:39 AM
This a poem of Mother Earth. It is a description, but it is an immortalization of Her life cycle.
Re: A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	5-Jul-05/9:34 AM
This absolutely beautiful.
Re: a comment on Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener	3-Jul-05/8:30 AM
I never said that I was going to be grammatically correct. Honestly, I know when something is wrong, but I like the 'built-in' mistakes. They show more unbridled emotion.
Re: a comment on Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener	30-Jun-05/7:10 AM
Nice idea, but it makes it sound like he killed himself. He died in a car accident. I also want it a bit vague.
Re: a comment on Jealousy's Game by TLRufener	24-Oct-04/11:47 AM
Yes.
Re: a comment on Jealousy's Game by TLRufener	24-Oct-04/11:43 AM
Exactly.
Re: a comment on Jealousy's Game by TLRufener	24-Oct-04/11:32 AM
The stout man is the lady's ex-lover, whom she left for someone who looks better. He is a representation of how looks can alter choices when it comes to who loves whom.
Re: a comment on Stranger by TLRufener	18-Oct-04/3:01 PM
I'm curious to know how that picture is relevant to the poem.
Re: a comment on Frozen Soul by TLRufener	20-Jun-04/8:21 PM
This poem was written for a friend of mine. After she told about her suicide attempt.
Re: Stick orgy by Bobjim_returns	14-Jun-04/6:16 PM
Entertaining.
Re: To Mother by lynnstratton	12-Jun-04/7:20 AM
Beautiful. I love the imagery. Very touching.