| Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
22-Jul-04/2:25 PM |
he's back...the black man's back...i'm a cock am i...that's nice to know since you dark angel are a fanny of the first order so we go together like sausage and bacon...a dripping, wibbling fanny...so all i have to say on this matter...and i'm not being ironic here but you are right..i find myself having to explain my attempts at irony every time...but well, the yanks among you just don't get it...i mean this is the nation that thought shouting "NORM" was even remotely funny...ah fuck it i've lost the run of myself altogether
NORM!
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| Re: a comment on Captain Napkin Starring In "The Passion Of Napkin" by horus8 |
29-Jun-04/10:42 AM |
i love it when the big boys gang up on each other...what's up doug?
the big boys won't let you join their gang...or did you fail the initiation test?...the trick is to write unmitigated rubbish that means nowt but that because it' oh so clever no one dare admit to not "getting" it...this poem is very clever but lacks warmth and emotional depth and resonance...it's a turd wrapped in silver foil and it stinks...you know how to write good poems don't you doug?...you know i'm right (and write) horus...you DO like your folds
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| Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
29-Jun-04/10:22 AM |
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So you didn't have the bollix to stand up to jack macwibble@zodiac.com and you've joined the lets gang up on pain killer bandwagon...you nearly creamned yourself when zodiac damned you with faint praise...what's up...you scared of him and his big wordy stick?...and Doug...your poetry is shite it keeps me up all night...and guess what...the big boys, you know, the regulars who sup at the poemrankers arms (real ale only) still don't like you...now THAT'S ironic...oh yeh i nearly forgot...irony is a concept yanks just can't get their heads around...(aint that true God's wifey) Doug...very poor
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| Re: a comment on Even manic dreamers must face Atropos by SupremeDreamer |
28-Jun-04/12:49 PM |
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you've really got something going S Dreamer. i haven't read all of your stuff yet, i tend to channnel surf my wa around the site every occasional half hour...but this is, well, it's something else man...again very lovely and very great already...ten...again
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| Re: a comment on Vodka kisses & the final sigh. by SupremeDreamer |
28-Jun-04/12:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Better Days by pain killer |
28-Jun-04/12:41 PM |
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Ta and blessed is yerself
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| Re: a comment on TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl |
26-Jun-04/2:47 PM |
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well i like this poem a lot so ho hum
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| Re: a comment on Heroin by zenhaircut |
26-Jun-04/2:34 PM |
oh do shut up god'd strife you insufferable bore
this is the best poem i've read on this site by a conga line of buggery mile...nice one
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| Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
26-Jun-04/2:14 PM |
hmmm...lots of wibbles and a fair old bit of honking going on here
in writing about niggers i'm referring to people like tarantino whose liberal sprinkling of the word "nigger" in his movies caused samual jackson who is black and starred in pulp fiction to question tarantino's motives...it appears tarantino was aiming for that all important essence of the street..tarantino is known to be a real "fan boy"
i'm also calling the shots on horus8 whi is basically an unreconstructed twat
and by the way...pain killer is kind of dark skinned himself coming from mixed race parentage and so has a divine right to write things like "niggers don't write poetry"
pain killr is not gay but he will let gordon zodiac@wibble.com rim him if he asks nicely
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| Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
22-Jun-04/1:41 PM |
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thank yew jessicagurl yew are sweet also and i'm glad you like my modest little ditty,(gosh i nearly said deity then, whatever came over me...and no it wasn't you zodiac...oh you wish big boy) wherever i can spread a little enlightenment and pleasure i shalll be happy to point and spray my sprinkler of big and clever words, no that's not me that's little billy mac zodiac@wibble.com...sorry...but yeh jess babe, thanks
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| Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
22-Jun-04/1:33 PM |
the "big" knave....why thank you god's wife, you DO know me after all
i shall call you the crimson spade...seeing as you are on a permanent period and all that...actually i take it back...the crimson spade is far too dramatic for one so, so dull...sniff
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
22-Jun-04/1:07 PM |
and this poem, it's not very good, it's very MEDOICRE really. it's very 3rd form morrissey...i mean, a thousand cigarettes! oh do come on! now there's an original image, an image that's never been conjured up before, smoked cigarettes, overflowing ashtrays, empty coffee cups...but then life is like that eh...a cliche
all comments can be redirected to williamzodiav@wobblehonk.com
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
22-Jun-04/1:03 PM |
you are writing these yourself aren't you jaime?i mean you and doug are one and the same...either that or you've really scared him (oh my)
by the way your music is, ummm, well, it's mediocre okay. mediocre being pain killer's word of the day.,..very eighties, very jm jarre very not very good at all
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| Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
22-Jun-04/12:49 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug |
22-Jun-04/11:05 AM |
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oi fred mczodiac@wibble.com, i suppose i should fold like a fragile flower under the full force of your mordant wit, either that or sulk a lot, but heaven knows we've already got one morrissey thank you very much, and the last time a checked one neil hannon too, although you do a make for a most divine comedy yourself...now where did i leave my whip..oh yes i left it in my valaise...just ask adam and admit you haven't the faintest idea what i'm on about have you?....ahh modern culture mr honk,modern culture.....or at least circa 1977
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| Re: Johnny Thunders And Me by pain killer |
22-Jun-04/10:55 AM |
why thank you for the honest criticsism...refreshingly lacking in ego self stroking aka fred zodiac et al@wibble.com
yeah i have a problem with self editing and metaphorical bullshit easy rhyming sequences apparently, just ask the self same fred zodiac@ honk.com
i'll take your comments to mind, glad you enjoyed it though
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| Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug |
19-Jun-04/2:44 PM |
oh jesus jones...henry o zodiac desides to give his honest and considered opinion and even declares this poem as not bad really and you are grateful. tell the cunt to go rim himself the patronising fantasist that he is. it's better by a conga line of buggery mile than any of the overblown slop that he writes. just because he's half literate doesn't mean he's any good. he's an over educated buffoon with nothing better to do than construct a fantasy life for himself via this site because his life in the (gulp) real world is so sadly lacking.
nice poem doug
willy mac zodiac...honk honk
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| Re: a comment on A Strenuous Recollection by Doug |
18-Jun-04/10:21 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Of Absinthe and Asphalt by pain killer |
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