Re: Better Days by pain killer	2-Jun-04/12:41 PM
Ummm...this is, er, autobiographical i suppose...shit happens and, err, shit happened and is still happening unfortunately...
Re: The Angel and The Ass by pain killer	2-Jun-04/12:50 PM
I got the idea of the title from the Nick Cave novel...I decided to write a bitter sweet tale of unrequited love disguised as a childrens poem...i dunno if it works or not...you tell me
Re: wibble wibble honk by pain killer	7-Jun-04/11:40 AM
this is the best poem ever posted by anyone anywhere ever zodiac....mate of horus8 horus8 king of the poemranker notice board/sad sack of shite delete where appropriate
Re: Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8	7-Jun-04/11:50 AM
hey horus8...you're quite good actually hah got you you're rubbish mate horus8..got no life got no mates apart from that zodiac dude and he doesn't count horus8 doesn't like angry chickens and uses words like solipsistic in his poems in the vain hope it makes him appear big and clever it doesn't solipsistic is one of THOSE words like asphalt i bet he's used that in one of his poems too i bet he's never used angry chickens i bet he's never been published i bet he's old,ugly and frustated he doesn't like me he doesn't like angry chickens he doesn't intimidate me i'm back boys have fun oh and one more thing parallels twotter
Re: Johnny Thunders And Me by pain killer	22-Jun-04/10:55 AM
why thank you for the honest criticsism...refreshingly lacking in ego self stroking aka fred zodiac et al@wibble.com yeah i have a problem with self editing and metaphorical bullshit easy rhyming sequences apparently, just ask the self same fred zodiac@ honk.com i'll take your comments to mind, glad you enjoyed it though
Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	22-Jun-04/12:49 PM
TEN!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-04/12:53 PM
the best thing i could come to say about this is that it's, ummm, it's mediocre. will that do? i mean HUGE CREATURES! oh do come on, it almost makes me yearn for the days of angry chickens
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-04/2:06 PM
oh zodiac, get over yourself will you wibble
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jun-04/2:17 PM
oh give it a rest will you god's wiff (poo) l;ots of wibbling lots of honking little else very very boring did anyone actually get to the end of thiss...this, err, thing?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jun-04/1:10 PM
oh deary deary me...honk...god's strife strikes again with an utterly predicatable ugly fat woman rant...intimidates small men indeed..oh come on...there's nothing wrong with skinny women you know...just as there's also nothing wrong with fat women (or men) or indeed ugly women (or men)....but you're not saying anything new...fat women envy skinny women...like so what...fashion magazines promote skinny...junk food promotes fat... and if you're that pissed about being fat do something about it woman and stop whinging...the choice is yours...if you're happy being fat (and why shouldn't you be) then for god's sake give it a rest...but there's nothing fantastic about having large thighs that rub together...it means you eat too much and lack self discipline and probably you don't like yourself too much either really...leave the skinny women alone eh...after all, you can't be too rich or too skinny, or so some nutter somewhere said...what next? the world bank oppresses third world nations?, Mcdonalds destroys rain forests? all men are fascist sexist pigs and potential rapists?...this is very poor...wibble