Re: Don't Look At Me! by assisenormus	13-May-04/10:13 PM
okay why do people waste their time writing this shit.... more importantly why the hell am i or anyone eles wasting their time reading this shit.... ya know if it was even alil funny that would at least make it kinda some what worth alil bit of the time we are wasting reading it.... but ummmm ITS NOT FUNNY ***rolls my eyes*** ......... oh just shoot me now!
Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart	13-May-04/10:20 PM
okay first of all why ask why so damn much... we cant define every aspect of life... second off if your not "one of these peolpe" why write about it... and last but not least, dont sit there on your pedestal and judge people because they are depressed... its not your place to say that they will never see the light, so if you arent like "those people" then write about something you actually know about .... thanks!!!
Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	13-May-04/10:31 PM
well normally i would say that this is just a waste of freakin space but.... however i think it is funny in a stupid kind of way! see yall have to try and pretend you are or are as close as a normal persons mind can get to ole daveys here to understand this POEM if thats what you want to call it. my conclusion: there is no fuckin meaning you idiots that keep saying the poem is awful and the poet is a fuckwit.... hes delibertly being a "fuckwit" to get either a) a rise out of people or b) a laugh out of people..... I chose to laugh my ass off but not at the poem, at the jerks who take this poem seriously and critisize it... HELLO YOU MORONS, THERES NOTHING TO CRITISIZE! AND DAVEY IM GIVING YOU A 10 JUST CUS IM IN A GOOD FUCKIN MOOD TODAY LMAO!
Re: -untitled- by althea7	13-May-04/10:35 PM
.... i read this ummmm ?poem? like 3 times and i still have no freakin clue what the poet is writing about.... lashes and feet?? i dunno thats all i could get out of it. can someone explain exactly what the heck this ?poem? is about pleaseeeeee....
Re: -untitled- by althea7	13-May-04/10:38 PM
and i quote from the poem " <BR> what i cannot say" ... no shit!!!! i still dont know what the hell she said.
Re: Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn	13-May-04/10:41 PM
okay i think that the poet is pissed or hurt.... im not real sure cus the poem dont make a whole lotta sence. oh well i give ya a 5 just cus u confussed the hello outta me.
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	13-May-04/10:49 PM
hey davey one question.... were you talking about michel jackson? and i quote from the poem:"Thou enjoyest the company of children in the bedroom," oh well..... its not the infamous EGG that you also wrote but ill give you a 7 just cus
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	13-May-04/10:57 PM
you know what.... first off dark angel dont preach to us man.... i mean gosh you write shit about aids on a van.... and then you want to sit here a quote scriptures.... second off the idoits that argue with you about god condeming you to hell need to get a life... every one sins and half of them dont care.... why the hell do we dissguse it on a poem post... open a chat room for crying out loud oh and im giving u a -5- cus personally i like the nude... its free and beautiful (unless your jelly rolls hang over your pecker... then its just gross... lol ewwwwww)
regarding some deleted poem...	13-May-04/11:04 PM
hey freddy......ummm what is the point of your poem.... i mean im assuming your explaining who u or "dave" or who ever the hell your writing about is... and that the last word of every line rhymes... but i like the "me" at the end so ill give u a -1- cus u did have to type it and all .... peace out
Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight	13-May-04/11:08 PM
hey i give you props girly.... i love it man oh man i love it....... cus i been there and you know what jim, jack, and jose are always around ... fuck guys get some liquor! ps i really did like the line " the one person worth your tears will never make you cry" ~~~~~ 10~~~~~~ peace out
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	13-May-04/11:12 PM
so what u got dumped get the fuck over it..... ya know i would tell you to get a blow up doll but she would proly leave your titty baby whinning ass too! ~0~
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	13-May-04/11:15 PM
oh yea one more thing.... the poem is suppose to be about 2 girls you love ... rite? well then there is "angie" and there is "Terryn" but at the end you say your happy the other girl you love is still your friend...... what the fuck...im lost i thought there was only 2 girls. oh wait did you already have a blow up doll? damn then i guess me telling you to go get one was a waste of my breathe.
Re: Being by horus8	13-May-04/11:28 PM
what the hello does it matter where the fictional character ac slaters name came from lol arent we suppose to be judging the poem here. ~10~
Re: Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	13-May-04/11:31 PM
and this is on the top 20? .... sheesh
Re: us by tatteredatlas	13-May-04/11:35 PM
you are like stars and whales fairy tales, i like that part just cus its cute....... kinda reminds me of the rhyme what are like girls made of lil girls are made of sugar and spice and everything nice. i think your poem is fairly good 7